One Piece Fan Fiction ❯ Mahou Mahou no Story ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: Satosan 
This story takes place after the Davey Back arc, thats after episode 219 of the anime (not quite sure where in the manga though. Haven't read the manga yet). Characters may be OOC since this is my first fanfic.
Anime/Manga: One Piece Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 09.24.2007 | Pages: 6 | Words: 6.5K | Visits: 377 | Status: Work In Progress
This story takes place after the Davey Back arc, thats after episode 219 of the anime (not quite sure where in the manga though. Haven't read the manga yet). Characters may be OOC since this is my first fanfic.
Anime/Manga: One Piece Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 09.24.2007 | Pages: 6 | Words: 6.5K | Visits: 377 | Status: Work In Progress
Mahou Mahou no Story Author Notes:
My first fanfiction that I decided to write. Hopefully it's good enough. Reviews would be helpful and I'll try to rewrite it there is any problems with spelling and such. Only helpful critique though, as it won't help me to write better if you flame. Flames only go to the imaginary fireplace to heat up my room.
Story Summary: A boy stuck in another world finds that he plays a much more important role than even he ever thought about. Pirates, strange powers from a fruit, mysterious people, what will happen next in his life and will he survive?
Rated T for some slight angst at times, and some swear words. Also slight violence later on.
OC character stats
Name: Akazawa Satoshi (Japanese spelling - Family name first)
Age: 17
Weight: 75 kg
Height: 166 cm
Hair: Light Blue, slightly messy with cowlick at top.
Eyes: Dark red, but larger, making him look slightly more innocent.
Personality: Very shy around strangers, generally not forceful. Changes as we go through the story.
Anything else: Wears glasses, is an anime otaku, likes to draw. Sometimes extremely clumsy.
This story takes place after the Davey Back arc, thats after episode 219 of the anime (not quite sure where in the manga though. Haven't read the manga yet). Characters may be OOC since this is my first fanfic. Hopefully it'll improve during the writing of this series. Please read and review as well. Any comments would be extremely helpful.
Disclaimer: I don't own One Piece or any other anime/manga that may pop up in this story. Though I wish I did.
"Talking"
'Thinking'
*Mental Communication*
--Scene Change—
MAHOU MAHOU NO SUTOORI
(MAGIC MAGIC STORY)
An One Piece Fan Fiction with elements of different anime, manga and games
Chapter 1
Somebody from another world?!
Just who is this person?
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A normal day, or so I thought.
It certainly started out normally. Wake up early, wash my face, eat breakfast, dress for school, rush for the bus, get to school on time, get ignored, have classes and then finally the end of school and getting back home.
A really tried and tested formula. Too bad it never changed.
Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Akazawa Satoshi, a kouhai at a school in the middle of nowhere of Japan. I turned seventeen this year on the 13th February (which coincidentally was also on a Friday). I'm an average guy with an average height and an average weight. Except maybe my hair color and my eye color. My hair is a light blue and my eyes are a dark red.
I've had enough of Ayanami jokes. It was funny at the beginning but it got old real fast. There also were people that hated me just for looking different in their eyes. I didn't fit in with their definition of normal. Most were silent about it at least.
"And that is why we use 4 here instead of the x, and replace y with a 2," the Math sensei droned on. Most of the students weren't listening since it was the last class of the day. I was no exception. Listening with half an ear, I doodled in my maths textbook. I was drawing a picture of Luffy, looking on victoriously, grinning wide as always. I sighed softly as I scribbled on the paper, my thoughts becoming preoccupied.
`I never really was a confident person. Most people have the wrong idea about me before they even try to understand me,' I thought to myself bitterly, the pencil strokes becoming more defined as time goes past. Stroke for stroke, the picture took shape to the final product when suddenly the bell rang. Announcements were made over the intercom while the teacher quickly wrapped up his lesson. The rest of the students were excited that the day were finally over, chatting with each other about the plans they had and whatever gossip they had to say. I ignored them as I quickly placed my stationary in my bag and stood up from my chair, remembering I had to rush as quickly as possible.
Why am I rushing I hear you ask? It so happens I have a bus I have to catch and if I don't hurry, I'll never make it. When I got in the hallway, I started to sprint as fast as possible to the entrance of the school, dodging students and teachers.
Currently I was in an abandoned area of the school, which I usually cut through, since it's a faster shortcut, when suddenly I got tripped up by something in the way, sending me sprawling quite a distance before I hit the floor face first with a sharp thump.
“Iteee…” I moaned. Pulling myself from the ground, I noticed a black army boot in front of me. Paling considerably since I know to who that boot belonged to, I tried to scamper away. It was too late though, since I was already surrounded by various goons of various sizes and intelligence. A hand grabbed me by my collar and lifted me up with ease. I struggled and tried to get free.
“Well, well,” A dangerous sounding voice spoke from just behind me. “What do we have here?” I could practically hear the sneer in the voice. “A blue-haired, red four-eyed freak, ain't that right?” I heard the knuckles crack of several of the goons around me. The voice in question came only from one person and I really hoped that I didn't have to run into him today. I tried to get free, but the grip just tightened.
“Zenitora-aniki,” one of the goons came forward. He really had an ugly grin on his face. “We going to hurt this guy bad?” Some of the other goons kept cracking their knuckles, sending shivers through my spine as I tried to get away.
Zenitora is the leader of the Tora gang, a well known gang in the school. They are definitely known for being troublemakers, but they have a darker side to them. Most of the school didn't dare stand up to them. And Zenitora is definitely imposing. He scares the hell out of a lot of people. But it's kind of strange. He has an abnormal sense of hatred for me at times, which makes me avoid him as much as possible.
Before I could scream out for someone for help, I felt a wet cloth being pushed against my mouth. `A gag!' I thought as I struggled as hard as possible to get away, but one of the goons punched me in my stomach, making my eyes water and knocking the air out of me. Zenitora then threw me to the ground hard. I spat out the cloth and tried to look up, but a boot pushed on my back, pinning me to the ground. Coughing violently, my eyes started to water.
“You're not going anywhere, freak,” Zenitora sneered venomously, and he applied more pressure on my back. The pain became unbearable and my head began to swim. I slowly lost consciousness as the rest of the goons started laughing and the rain of beatings fell over my body.
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Pain…
I awoke slowly, wincing as pain after pain went through my body. I coughed hoarsely. Everything was dark around me so I could barely see my surroundings, though it seemed Zenitora and his gang wasn't around me anymore. They must have left me for dead right here.
`I-its ex-*cough*-tremely painful,' I thought to myself, shuddering as a cool wind suddenly slices through the air, making me cold.
“Do not worry, young one,” a voice echoed around the room, the room warming up slightly. “You are not dead, just barely though.”
“Who… who *cough* are you?” I inquired softly, my throat sore. I must be hallucinating, as I swore I smelled something akin to sea air. But that couldn't be right. We're not even close to the sea. I then noticed a silhouette in front of me, in something that looked like a billowing cloak. It was too dark to see who or what it was.
“Who I am is not now important. All that is important right now is your safety.” The silhouette opened its arms and then a song filled the air, a beautiful melody of nostalgic times. I felt myself fall drowsy as the song played out. A light grew in front of me, and then, nothing more as I slipped in unconsciousness once again.
*Please be safe, young one. You have a more important role to play than you think.* the silhouette spoke sadly, before dispersing with a puff of smoke.
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On the Grand Line, a certain group of pirates sailed. They are the Straw Hat pirates. After a grueling Davey Back fight, where they nearly lost two of their nakama, they decided to travel onwards on the look for new adventure and excitement.
Everything seemed peaceful, well as peaceful as it can get on the Going Merry. Luffy was lazing on the rams' head and Usopp was telling Chopper another of his stories while the reindeer listened on in awe. Robin was sitting on her favorite chair reading a book on ruins, Zoro was sleeping, Nami was busy making sure they were on the right course and designing some maps and Sanji was making lunch and treats for the lovely girls. They haven't been chased by any marines or pirates the entire day.
All in all, a relatively peaceful day.
Suddenly a serene melody could be heard from all over the ship. Luffy jumped off the rams head and headed over to where Usopp and Chopper were being entranced by the song. Zoro woke up, yawning and blinking as he heard the song. Robin closed her book, listening attentively and preparing for the worst.
“Naaa, what a nice melody,” Luffy said with a grin, Chopper and Usopp agreeing. Nami and Sanji got out of their respective rooms as the rest of the crew stood transfixed.
“Where is this melody coming from?” Nami thought out loud, though nobody had an answer. They kept on listening as the melody kept on going.
A bright light shone suddenly, blinding whoever was outside at the moment and Usopp and Chopper hid behind the mast quickly in fright (though Usopp will say he was prepared). When everyone finally recovered and Zoro ready for in case, they noticed someone on the floor. A blue haired boy, looking quite beat up all over, raggedly taking breaths. He wore a double-layer shirt, the long sleeves dark green and the short sleeves light green and the short shirt having a simple red stripe through the middle. He also wore simple black, baggy pants with black sneakers. He had glasses on his face.
“Who's this?” Luffy revolved around the new person, taking in the characteristics of this new guy. He noticed the various bruises and bleeding on the kid, and then turned to Chopper. “Naa, Chopper. He's beat up.”
“AHHH! DOCTOR!” Chopper screamed hysterically, running around in circles. “WHERE'S A DOCTOR?”
“OI, YOU ARE!” Everyone else shouted except Robin.
“Oh yeah,” Chopper remembered, then inspected the boy quickly. He turned to Robin. “Robin-san, please take him to the infirmary quickly. And prepare the warm water also. ” and then he turned to rest of the crew. “I'm going to need peace and quiet.”
With a whisper of her breath, she created a flurry of hands, which picks up the boy as gently as possible. And then Chopper went straight ahead to the infirmary, Robin following him with the boy in her created hands. Everybody looked on, various thoughts going through their heads. Luffy only smiled.
“We're leaving him in the hands of our great doctor, guys! Best not worry about it.” And he went and sat on the ram head of the Going Merry again. The rest dispersed to their activities, wondering what is going on. One thing is on the mind of most of them.
`Who is this kid?'
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On a island several days away from the Going Merry, a silhouette stood on the dock, looking out toward the sea. The cloak it was wearing billowed in the wind and a smile lighted slightly on its face.
“Finally, the story is coming to its beginning.” The person looked up. “How will the pieces play out? And how will he react to this new situation?”
The silhouette moved away, blending away and disappearing before anyone took notice.
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Regaining consciousness was tiring, that's for sure. I groaned slightly as my body ache from the dull pain. I open my eyes carefully, but noticed that I could only see through one. My ears were a bit dull, and I could faintly hear someone shouting. I couldn't see much, since I didn't have my glasses on, but I noticed some human shaped forms in front of me. My ears then started to clear and then jumbled voices were around me, making it difficult to hear them. I shook my head to clear the noise. I patted away, trying to find my glasses. Finding them, I slid it over my eyes. Blinking to adjust my open eye, I looked at who was in the room.
There were several people in the small room. Though the thing that stood out from the rest at that moment was a creature standing on its hind legs, with a pink hat on its head and antlers poking out of it.
`I must be hallucinating,' I thought to myself. `There's no way Chopper is standing in front of me.' Quickly taking off my glasses and rubbing my eyes, I look again. I look again. Same as before, it seemed. I looked around to the rest. I saw Nami looking on interested, Zoro looking at me suspiciously, Robin with a smile on her face and Luffy in front of me, a big grin on his face. Chopper was looking on nervously.
`If Chopper looked nervous, then what about me?!' I thought to myself.
“HEYA!” Luffy shouted. He had black hair that was covered with a straw hat. “My name is Monkey D Luffy. What's yours?”
I felt flustered and self-conscious suddenly. I'm not good at meeting people for the first time ever, and they were generally not this overexcited. Before I got to answer back, Luffy was pulled back by Nami.
“Give him a little space!” She whispered harshly to Luffy. Nami had orange, short hair and chocolate brown eyes and a slender build. Looking over at me, she smiled “I'm Nami. What's your name?”
“A-akazawa Satoshi,” I stammered nervously. Being in front of your favourite anime characters is like one of the strangest dreams I've ever had.
“Well, you met our esteemed captain just now, and I'm the navigator,” Nami replied. “This is Zoro, the first mate,” she pointed him out, a green haired man with three katana, and then to another woman with black hair and a cowboy hat on. “This is Nico Robin, our archeologist.” And then she pointed out the cute looking reindeer down below. “And this is Tony Tony Chopper, our doctor. He was the one who patched you up.”
I smiled slightly at Chopper. “Arigato Chopper-sensei.”
“Don't thank me, you bastard!” He shouted, all while looking happy. I laughed slightly, but suddenly coughed badly. Chopper was up to me in a flash, giving me a glass of water. Sipping greedily, I start to feel better.
“Daijoubu?” Chopper asked. I nodded, my breath finally returning.
“I'll get Cook-san to make some food for you, Another-san,” and with that, Robin quickly went out.
“Well, Satoshi-san,” she started to say. “Where are you from? It's not every day someone just suddenly appears on our ship out of nowhere.”
I mused a bit. “Japan,” I said.
“Haven't heard of a place called Japan,” Nami said, rubbing her chin in a thoughtful manner. “Is it on the Grand Line somewhere?”
I was about to answer, when two people following Robin walked into the door. The first thing I noticed was a long nose.
“I see you're awake, thanks to heroic deeds of me, great Captain Usopp!” The one with the long nose exclaimed. Luffy knocked him over the head. “I'm captain, baka!”
“It's not like you did anything,” Zoro mumbled, and I was sure he smirked. “You were too scared to do anything.” Usopp squawked indignantly, looking put off.
The other one was Sanji, the cook. He had blond hair that fell over his one eye and he had a tray of food in his hands.
“OI, careful!” he muttered angrily to Luffy and Usopp, kicking them away. He looked over at me. “I'm Sanji, the cook.” Nami took the tray out of Sanji's hands and placed it in my lap.
She smiled. “Eat up. Sanji's cooking is some of the best.” Sanji did his Mellorine dance, which invoked another soft laugh from me (it's just too comical face-to-face). Nami then ushered the rest of the crew out, except Chopper. “We'll come back to talk some more when you feel better, Satoshi-san. Eat up and rest.”
“Deeemooo Nami! I wanna hear more about Satoshi!” Luffy whined. Nami struck him over the head and pulled him out, saying that I needed peace and quiet. The rest followed, bidding me good night, except for Zoro, who still looked suspicious torward me.
I made myself more comfortable, and started to eat slowly, bite for bite. It really was a tasty dish and soon it was done. Chopper did a quick checkup.
“You're recovering pretty well,” he said. “It has been a few days at least, though.”
“Wait… a few days?” I felt shocked. I didn't think I was going to recover that quickly from the way I felt that day. `Must be Chopper who's such a good doctor.' I thought to myself.
“Hnn,” He muttered. “You should be recovered by tomorrow at least.” Chopper then finished his checkup and gave me some medicine and water to take. He then went to his worktable to work on whatever he was working on at the moment.
I placed the tray of eaten food on the side dresser. I slid down in the bed, and as I relax, my thoughts began to flow through my head.
`This is all so strange.' I felt confused. `What is going to happen? Will I ever return home?' A frown began to form on my face. `Do… Do I even want to return home? Especially with what happened?' A flash of painful remembrance passed. I curled into a ball, covering myself with the blanket. `Nan… nan demo nai…' I thought to myself sadly, tears threatening to burst out. I began to feel drowsy.
Sleep just followed thereafter.
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Chapter 1 End
Author's notes
Well, this took a while. This is Rewrite 2.5 in essence, since my previous chapter weren't as good. I felt I did pretty decent. Any comments will be useful, except flames which will go into the fireplace to heat up the room.
I enjoy using some Japanese words, since it feels much better to use some of them. I haven't watched the dub (which seems like a good thing anyway *laughs*), since my country haven't aired it yet. Let's hope they don't.
Till next time, it's Ja Ne from me, Satosan.
Translations for Japanese words
Kouhai - Junior in a Japanese school.
Ite - Ouch!
Nakama - Basically comrades or friends
Arigato - Thank you
Sensei - Either teacher or doctor. If used for Chopper, then it means the latter.
Daijoubu? - Are you all right?
Demo - But