| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 20:49 CST
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Would you read my story plese, its called One board day PREETY PLEASE. oh and UPDATE SOON
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Title: DMInuyasha
Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its me,chey i finally regusterd as a media miner member.i just wanted u to no
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this before it was brought over to MediaMinor. And I still love it. LMAO when they had the mud battle though. And the one female that threw herself at Miroku and he never once asked her to bear any of his children,lmao. I had been wondering what was going on with Sesshomaru and Rin. Pretty cool with what Rin seems to be able to do now. Cant wait to see what else you come up with for her. And aside from the mud battle, Ive been wondering what was going on with InuYasha and Kagome. Should be interesting. Will be awaiting the next update.
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Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: November 17, 2005 16:11 CST
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Awww that chapter was so sweet! I loved it! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what's next.
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 20:18 CST
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I discovered this story three days ago and have sat at my computer obsessively reading the chapters to get caught up! I am thoroughly enjoying your melding of these two universes and in fact, I'm now interested in reading the books your crossover universe is based on. What a fun world, and the Inuyasha gang has fit right in. And aside from loving the Inu/Kag romance (yay!), I think you've done a terrific job of developing Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's brotherly relationship. I've gone through the gamut of emotions with these two from amused to frustrated to heartbroken and back again. I especially loved the mud fight scene -- I just had this image in my head of two big dogs barking at each other and romping in the mud! So, I greatly look forward to the next installment when your muse and/or time permits! Thanks for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: Chey On: November 14, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slaps self* Im soooooooo sorry for not reviewing as much.this chapter was wonderful as always.this fic has become the longes one i have read and so far the best.i cant help but wait for the next chapter.plese update soon.what gets me is only 43 reviews and over 1000 visets,shame on them it only takes a few minets to review this wondreful fic.again sorry for not reviewing.
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Reviewed By: Patchcat NSI On: November 12, 2005 15:50 CST
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I have to say that I have been enjoying this story greatly; and even though I have never read any of Eddings' novels, I have not trouble following what's going on. That said, however, there is one thing that tends to throw me out of the story, and it is very easily fixed. Rains -- when water falls from the sky. Reigns -- what a king or queen does to govern their realm. Reins (and this one you should use more often) -- the leather straps used to control a horse. I'm sure that you already know this. I only mention it because it detracts from the otherwise pleasurable experience of reading your work. Thank you for sharing with us, and I look forward to your next update. Patch
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Reviewed By: emilyhigurashi55 On: November 08, 2005 20:10 CST
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oh my god this fanfic is amazing - PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M DYING HERE!
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 29, 2005 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad your story was nominated. It is an excellent story and deserves recognition. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: starchild* On: October 12, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey super story! I just can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh, I loved the mud fight you made with InuYasha and Sesshoumaru. I laught so hard. You did a realy great job. Well I send my next revew when you put up the next chapter. Until then keep on writing! Starchild*
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 03, 2005 00:24 CDT
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This by the way is my fav chapter. and all because of one thing....MUD FIGHT. all i have to say to that is i'm glad the puppies are playing nicely again. lol. at least inuyasha clued sess into what's going on with rin. maybe it will help some. how's your paper from school doing. good luck on that. update when your able. your good enough to wait for....luvs ya
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 02, 2005 22:24 CDT
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it's me again. read both new chapters at the same time and you just had to remind me about those uncured animal skins, didn't you!!!!Poor Rin, and Poor Sesshoumaru, her not sure why he won't say anything, and him being a baka for not realizing just how badly he's hurting rin. I must agree though that inuyasha does have prettier hair then kagome. ttyl
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Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: September 27, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my f-ing god!!!!!! This is SUCH an amazing story! I can't believe how you can think of all these complex new characters, and the Inu/Kagome lemons are really intriguing and well-written. (I'm hoping for a Miroku/Sango one soon ;) And also the Sesshoumaru/Rin relationship is so cute how he cares for her. And I really like how Inu and Sessh are getting along - I've always wanted them to, though I know it'll never happen in the anime or manga. Anyway, I think you are an absolutely fantastic writer and I'm really glad I discovered this fanfic! You do a REALLY good job of updating (I've never read a fanfic before where I didn't have to wait long at all for the next chapter), so keep doing it! Seriously, I love this story. Great job!! :)
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: September 26, 2005 21:34 CDT
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Okay. confession first. i went to aff. and read the rest of the story. loved what you have written so far. but i'll keep my reviews here. YOUR MEAN>>>sorry had to...lol. baka grolims is all i have to say. how dare they pick on inuyasha. but i love the way sesshoumaru comforted him. he's starting to more and more show how much he really cares about his brother. and kagome. and the fact that he actually trusted the monk to do as he was told. well all i have to say is baka fluffy...thanks. like i said loved it.
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Reviewed By: bk On: September 26, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a cliffhanger. I think Naraku may be closer than they think. We know Kagone will survive now that Sess is there but will Inu ever be the same knowing what he almost did? Questions, questions I guess I will just have to wait till next time. Keep writing.
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