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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2012 00:19 EST
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i was so happy that they're really finding each other and when they get kagome and kirara the group will be complete-- one wonders about kikyou (i think she's more suited to sesshoumaru but the other inu-youkai is fine with me, just not inuyasha. inuyasha/kikyou is just as ridiculous as sessh/kagome = total crack.) ♥ gin |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2012 19:30 EST
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i think he likes her -- tomotsu with kikyou (i like her with sesshoumaru but his cousin is cool). ♣ love sesshoumaru's "miko, you will tell me everything." and kagome's going, "yep, like that's going to happen." it was funny when she just backed down after getting in his face, i could sense the shock. &daims; want to see something amazing? ♥ http://www.youtube.com/v/ObdlLp7gkYA?version=3&%3Bhl=en_US ♠ and if you want to see the anime ♥ http://www.animeseason.com/rurouni-kenshin/ ♥ or read the manga ♥ http://view.thespectrum.net/series/rurouni-kenshin-volume-01.html ♥ --they're getting closer and closer to meeting! \o/ ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2011 15:22 EDT
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this was so great!! \o/ wonderful reunion with inuyasha, sango and miroku! a lot of fun/funny stuff in this. i love how you blend angst and horror with generous sprinkles of humor (that's the biggest reason i'm hooked on this story)! ♣ WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN WITH KAGOME DEA!?!?!? 0_0;; ♥ |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 00:08 EDT
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oh my! lots happening-- and most of it good. what are they going to do about a dead kagome? poor girls, and now mama's going to be beholding to kouga unless he grows an attachment to one of the other girls. it's great that at least shippou is going to meet up with inuyasha maybe soon! \o/ and it seems like miroku and sango might be in the vicinity too. i guess they're herding them all to one place now. great stuff! ♥ |
Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2011 15:14 EDT
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Hey, are you okay? It's been a super long time since you've updated, so I thought I'd check in. |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2010 23:34 EDT
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oh my --poor shippou and poor kagura! ♣ one wonders what naraku/evil entity have planned now. ♦ so now kagome's friends know the truth and have been sucked into the adventure too --not a good thing at all. ♠ is this where shippou and kagura will meet up with the wolves, and how is kouga going to act towards kagura? --great chapter and as convoluted and amazing as ever! &hearets;
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Reviewed By: deeds [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story, and love the references, especially the princess bride one from inuyasha. you have a very polished style, and the pace is quick, but still suspenseful, keeping your readers hooked. great job, but my problem with fanfics is they leave me hanging......i try to think of them as serials that way i have hope of seeing the endings, get some closure. i hope you continue to update. deeds
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 09:13 EDT
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Yay! I was really excited to see another chapter from you when I opened my inbox today for the first time in weeks. I like the switching-around of characters so we get an overview of what's happening all at once. And I especially appreciate the extra long chapter. =D I don't know if I've commented on this before, but I love the dark humor that crops up unexpectedly throughout your fiction. Kaede's "Well, it's about time. I'm too old for this shit anyway." had me grinning, and Inuyasha's "What would happen if he just said, `yes, that'd be great'? Tidal waves? Earthquakes? Shit." made me laugh out loud. And of course throwing Totosai into the mix was brilliant, as he's a rich source of comic relief. Also I'm interested to know what Kagura's power turns out to be. Anyways, thanks again for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 01:42 EDT
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very sad about keade, but after the first bit she felt no pain. ♣ i guess the glass bottle that was shattered in kagome's room might have contained a couple shards? the modern era drama- i'm not sure if they're getting crazier or what. did souta have a premonition of something coming sinister coming out of the well? ♦ lolz, the way kikyou is motivating kagome. the sesshoumaru instability problems. *shakes head and laughs* the only one who doesn't seem to be totally nuts is the cousin. ♠ one is excited, curious, and a little leary as to who's going to meet up with who, and what other surprises will be had. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 06:25 EDT
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maybe the insanity is dissipating? or not. it looks as if there are a few who will be helping kagome get better and prepared. inuyasha seems to be a bit touched, or maybe it's his constant detours and convoluted interruptions that-- oh, here's another one. revisiting the past (or encountering it over and over again). LOL it seems to really be getting to him. *shakes head* ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 04:08 EDT
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everything is all f#@%ed up and everyone is uber crazy in the head. nothing is working right-- and where did shippou get that much power?!? *falls over* ♣ at least her mother knows kagome is alive. too bad about jii-chan =( ♥;
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 02:03 EDT
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Yay! I laughed out loud when Momiji (/spellingfail) went apeshit on Sango and Miroku, but my favorite parts of this chapter were the bits where Sesshoumaru was faced with the startling concept that he wasn't the center of the universe. xD Thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 00:35 EDT
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such a bleak period, one wonders how people are to survive the winter. although in some parts of japan, winters are somewhat mild and growing things may still be found if it wasn't decimated by the rains. the schizophrenia and paranoia that sesshoumaru, jakan, and rin are experiencing can't be very good. one hopes the tachi comes together soon, it's so very disconcerting to imagine them having to experience such a desolate existence for long. as always, you pepper this with humor and irony. ♥
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2010 01:52 EST
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Eeeh, exciting. The plot is definitely thickening now. :x I'm really glad you updated - I was starting to get worried!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 19:48 EST
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i really like your OC tamotsu, he's quite the comic relief. one wonders if they aren't all drawn to kagome in some way. inuyasha is trying to get to edo, but keeps getting waylayed by needy people dragging him grudgingly in hopefully kagome's direction. kagura and shippou are seeking sesshoumaru out. the only ones who are having difficulties are miroku and sango. --i love the humor you pepper such a serious story with. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 20:24 EST
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so sorry this is so late... wow, kagome's now awake and we sort of have an inkling of what's going on. great stuff! ♥
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 00:17 EST
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Great job on book I, nice to see you jumping head first into Book II. I love the length of your chapters and the quality of the work. Its hard to come by stories that are long, written well, and have a plot the grabs you.. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 17:48 EST
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When I came home today, I saw several updates from various authors and decided to save the best for last. =D Just for the record, the entire time I spend reading one of your chapters, my arms are covered in goosebumps. You have this really amazing use of repetition to profound effect. When Chiyoko said "And let's not waste our time thinking how that's not fair", as other characters have been reciting before waking up from their comas, it gave me the shivers. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 19:41 EST
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Thank you for the new chapter! I've subscribed to your author alerts so I get to read Book Two. I'm still disturbed by the lack of reviews, since your story isn't boring, or cliche, or tl;dr, or anything except amazing and inventive. Do you post over at ff.net? It can be a little more encouraging over there.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 10:32 EST
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This newest chapter ties with 'Kikyou and Kohaku' as my favorite chapter. Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 23:45 EST
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your OC is very interesting --youkai version of miroku *chuckles* i am curious as to the pairings -- you've got lots of women: kikyou, kagome, rin, kagura, and boton =p assuming you've got sango with miroku and they're staying together. (yes, i'm curious because you have listed as one of the categories this falls into is 'romance' and i am a pairing purest, at least for the main two characters). ♣ sesshoumaru's mother, i'm assuming that she's alive and like the typical mother she enjoys annoying and irritating her son (i'm like that, just ask my kids). i figured something about everyone's little portions of prophesy in their dreams has something to do with the prophesy the lady horse youkai's and sesshoumaru's mother had spoken of? --don't mind me, just useless speculation and conjecture to take up space and make it look like a well thought out and pertinent review. succeed or not, i'm out of thoughts so-- adieu, or more appropriately-- jamata. (silly mood, sorry) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1v_nZEljINg --i'm looking forward to more, and when the sun shines the world becomes clearer and clearer. ♥
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Title: Scriptix
Reviewed By: Lalieth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 09:02 EST
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Scriptix : Thank you for the heads up. I have fixed the prologue. And thanks everyone for the reviews so far! I'm very busily writing "Sesshoumaru, Jaken, and Rin" as we speak. I hope to get it up next week.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 08:04 EST
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Okay, and now I'm done with what you have so far. And all I can say is - stunning. Your first set of chapters was written in an amazing storytelling voice, and the second half hasn't disappointed at all. The visions everyone is having are downright creepy, and I can't wait to read more about what happens!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 04:45 EST
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I've just started to read this fic, so I thought I'd let you know that your prologue is glitching: "how odd: blank named file in directory how odd: blank named file in directory" At first I thought this was some future AU despite the summary, rofl.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2010 22:47 EST
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there are just too few reviews! ♣ so now kikyou is flesh and bone instead of a reanimated porcelain shell-- searching for answers. i guess the big question is 'what happened to kagome?' whatever had she done with naraku and the jewel seems to be what caused the horrible weather, like a pyroclastic explosion followed by heavy rains-- a cleansing? i'm looking forward to finding out how each party will fare, if they will come together, and what you will reveal. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 15:22 EDT
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"His Imperial Indifference is waiting for us.†~LOL~ the best description i've ever read! ♣ this just keeps one at the edge desperate to know about everyone's fate and of what will happen next. one hopes for kagome's safety but fears the worst. --emotionally riveting. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 02:05 EDT
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wow! that was some read. one is in awe at the depth you delved into their own personal... hells? you are an amazing artist-- painting color with black on white words. ♥ thank you, ginny --in eager anticipation for more.
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Reviewed By: JaneyJane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 21:23 EST
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You write very well...your grammar is perfect, and your characters very well described. I'm surprised to have to click a button instead of turning a page. The only thing I wonder about is whether or not you've read The Belgariad, by David Eddings. Some of your scenes seem remarkably similar to some passages I've read. It doesn't take away from your story, although it makes me wonder if more similarities will appear. I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Title: Avid Reader - as always
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Well, I'm glad you're back and in good health. I haven't read the lastest chapter yet (I've forgotten exactly what happened - outside the time loop concept - in this fic), but I'll be sure to leave you a review when I do. The rating's based on what I DO rememeber. In any case, hope all's well and again - welcome back. ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update! Update! Update! Update!Update!Update!Update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!! I can't last much longer!!!!!!AAAAHHHHH!
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