| "Not So Little Anymore" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: lee_mikah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my my my ... you won't believe how much that last chapter of yours made me laugh.Very original and .. well.. HILARIOUS!! I could vividly see Kakashi jumping out the window ..after his beloved book XD *cackles* Out of the many, MANY fanfics I've read, your's was probably the only one that made me grin for days (because that scene kept popping into my mind)!! Well.. I see that you haven't updated for... months.. but I guess there is still hope!! Please update! I'll look forward to the next chapter >=D
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Reviewed By: Muffin_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BUWHAHAHA I love you and this story! Why haven't you updated lately, love? It's not everday that I find such a quality piece of work! And then *tears* you don't update? I don't really see the "mary-sue" thing, and it kind of pisses me off that anyone would say that about this story. You're obvious talented, write quite eloquently and someone has the audacity to say something bad about this story? Especially when there is such total shit written out there, someone has to come and insult you and your amazing story? PFFTH!! (let me at em`!)
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Title: Gai....
Reviewed By: Dark_lites [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... He was just a special add in right there.. How does he pop up out of no where, then he gets beat and says it's out of love. Does the word mental come to mind for you as it does for me? It should. Kakashi was funny. He jumped out of a window Icha Icha. What?! Then says a band ninja's jumped him. I know I'm stating the obvious because you wrote it but not the point. Continue with the story and their really long chapters (Which I luv). Peace out, ~~*~~ Dark_lites
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Title: Meaning of Gozaimasu
Reviewed By: Kakashi x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 01:11 CDT
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To answer Rhee's question about the meaning of 'gozaimasu', it means like thank you with much appreciation. When you say like, "arigatou" its just like thank you, but to add gozaimasu at the end is like adding more thoughtfulness into it. =) hope that helps. And thanks for the reviews everyone :D
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Reviewed By: Rhee On: August 15, 2005 03:59 CDT
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Another great chapter, although there were a couple of wierd sentences here and there it was another awesome chapter. I do have a question though, what does 'gozaimasu' mean? I understand everything else but that, i've had my guesses but i really must know ^_^; Anyways, i hope you update soon, ja ne!
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Title: poor Natsuki...
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel all bad 'cause Naruto doesn't remember and all that - I hope he remembers soon! ^^ Anywho, wonderful chapter! I do have to say that there were some spelling mistakes, but they were easy enough to overlook while reading. I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the end with the mission. I had a feeling, right when Natsuki said that it may be a C Mission, that it was probably cleaning. Lol, poor Kakashi... I give him my sympathy. Anywho, see you next chapter! ^_^ -Amanda
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Reviewed By: animeobession24 On: August 12, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ update soon!!!!! I'm looking forward to your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rhee On: August 10, 2005 03:25 CDT
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Yeay! Another wonderful chapter, nice work. I found that not trying to pack as many scenes with Kakashi in it as possible to be a good thing, you'd be better off doing more character building with Nat before pushing her back to Konoha. I'd like to see what you have comming up for these girls, i hope its comical and maybe see something new, like a battle or some summons learning. Well its up to you, i'll be eagerly waiting for your next chapter, Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with the person below, it's very original. Plus it makes me all happy inside when you find out that Natsuki knew Naruto and protected him ^^. Plus the way that you tie in Kakashi, Iruka, and Naruto was very... I dunno, awesome is the only thing I can think of. Anyway, I hope that you update soon, as I really can't wait for the next chapter - I'm eager to see how you're going to make Kakashi and Natsuki end up together : )
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Reviewed By: Rhee On: August 04, 2005 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really nice story. I liked the originality of the way the girl knows Kakashi. I can't wait for the next chapter so please post soon ^_^ Ja ne.
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