Reviewed By: Qem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. I think you might of been better off not listing this as a crossover fic, because it really didn't feel much like a cross-over and I nearly didn't read it because I don't really know the other fandoms, besides DNAngel. However the story itself was pretty enjoyable, Dark's wariness, warning Daisuki that he didn't want to get into this mess. Satoshi's love for Daisuki forcing him to give in, Krad's obsession with Satoshi, demanding that he pay attention, it all made for a really interesting read. The ending was sad, but seemed appropriate. The way that Satoshi felt he had no other choice, no other way to escape was very touching. Also summaries, like "please leave a review" I've noticed actually tend to put off a lot of people, they generally prefer to know what the story is about... Something along the lines of "For Satoshi his life is defined by Daisuki, Dark and Krad. Krad wants to narrow this down to one person" might be better. *Shrugs* I did enjoy the story, so just wanted to say that, even if media miner is deciding to be spastic about letting me review.
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