| "The Agent" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomps Kiya-sama* hey!! wow so much has happen... *laughs at the term 'butt sex' snickers* I know he meant it seriously but at that particular time, it seemed light that he knew why he put up with their abuse and he didn't let it torment him, degrade him. If he felt hurt or pain he reminded himself why he was putting up with it. Soo it seems Quat and Tro are together though when they're in the work place they seem so distant at odds with each other. but I'm so happy that who they are wasn't completely lost in the brain washing. DING dong the psycho's dead! Wahoo!! I fearful that it would be some time yet before the guy was actually killed. Shesh...Zechs did a total personality flip, from the sicko's aid & number 1 lap dog to the defiant man that I had hoped he was... I'm still upset that Wuffles is gone, that his first true taste of freedom was when Duo killed him... man I think that will always stick with me. Oh And Heero... trying to keep it together... it's like he went zero...*smiles* but could it be that Trieze had something done to him without his knowing it. hey had the opportunity many times when he'd been sleeping for several days, he wouldn't have known if they had... I hope they make it to Duo before he collapses. Can't wait for the next one!! And thank you for sticking with it.
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:30 CDT
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amazing. so much in one chapter but so welcome. the progress was great and it was just.....great. i am kind of worthless for words right now. thanks for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 07:46 CST
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ACK!!! SAVE HEERO!!! GET TO THE LEMON!! KILL TREIZE!! I ACTUALLY FEEL SORRY FOR RELENA--gahhhhhh!!!!! 10+ RATING
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This most definatelly got my attention!I'm up to chap 7 now and just don't have the opportunity to finish it but I just HAD to leave a review and tell you how exited I am thinking about seeing this story unfold! I'd love to give you a long review and share all that I have to say but I'm extremely short on time so I just ask you to not let us readers down and update regularly and fast! :D
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 20:36 CST
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yeah! a quick update! woohoo! i feel so bad for heero, who more than likely will die inside that damned organization. makes me so sad. and the situation with zechs and relena? shocking but not too surprising. let's hope trieze is not too sick of a bastard.
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:13 CST
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oh, oh, i loved this chapter. it was sooo good. i was almost breathless reading it. such action, and it was intense. such a good job.
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 23:27 CST
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i really like it. the narrative is deep, the descriptions are good, and the characterizations well done. the dialogue is good, and the tension is as well. i really just like it and i encourage you to continue.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:33 CDT
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THIS IS FREAKIN' FANTASTIC!!! So at Ch. 5, we've come full circle now to see where we go from there... Update!!! Please! this is good... opposition my ass... the bastards, it's all propaganda. And as Trowa revealed by revealing how he and Quatre joined the Organization, the opposition are those that don't believe or follow their rules and that could be anyone and everyone. Man this GOOD, update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: LifeorBust [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:44 CDT
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That's a cruel way to end a chapter!! Very interesting though, and i'll continue to look forward to new chapters.
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! Very enjoyable. The details are very well done and it's easy to visualize the scene. Looking forward to seeing what happens with the fight between Duo and Wufei. I love Heero's persona so far, his struggles and such in regards to his feelings for Agent 002. And I got shivers with how cold Quatre and Trowa are, as well as Wufei who seems to be nothing but a vacuous robot.
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Reviewed By: Sekiseishi On: September 03, 2005 22:31 CDT
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luv it, you must continue! (but limit the spandex, there's enough in the show) ;)
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Reviewed By: Dream keeper On: September 01, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. Only problem now is, I want to know what happens! ;) Great writing, and interesting plot. Please update?
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