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| "1/2 an Age" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok, this does turn into an Epic, I just hope you'll be able to keep up the size of the chapters (and their quality ^_~) at the level they are now. Though I REALLY dislike the current Ranma/Akane situation (I'm not an Akane-hater, but so far your Akane evokes only greater and greater dislike :((( ) The next chapter promises action and I'm eager to see how you can write battle scenes ^_^
| Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've read only one X-over with Weel of Time, but this one seems more... rich with details and plot. Though I, personally, disliked the idea on Nabiki meddling with Ranma and Akane's (and everyone else) love like this (like: we are great and mighty, all lesser creatures are our playthings and will fulfill the things we designed for them...) Still, the story shows a great promise to become an Epic.
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