Title: AWWW!!
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 22:36 CST
Comment/Review:
SO proud of you for jumping back into writing. And this is a great starter! Very descriptive. It draws you into the character's mind, and builds up a higher sense of sympathy for his situation. More soon, I hope? ^_^
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