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Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This world that I've stumbled upon that you have created has sucked me in since the very beginning. You write Naru-chan just like I always thought he would've been as a child, and Sasuke as well if things would have been different. I absolutely adore/am in love with this fic. Seriously, I want to have it's babies. Or would that be ficlets? XD Please continue writing this uber-cute fiction. It's a bright spot on my otherwise gloomy year.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it wasn't a too long wait. It now makes me excited wondering how you'll write Arashi's recovery and Naru's new adventures to come! Hope your creativity and inspirations soar through the roof in the chapters to come!
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Reviewed By: shattered-words (not signed in) On: February 19, 2009 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it wasn't a long wait at all! i felt so...gah, affected by it all. poor naruto and arashi. i can't wait to read the next part of this arch. good job.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: guest1 On: February 19, 2009 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a great job! I look forward to the rest!
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Reviewed By: shattered-words (too lazy) On: January 03, 2009 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i wanted to cry so badly just then, and also cheering on itachi to inflict unmeasured pain on that b*stard >.< so so so so GOOD! thank you so much for updating so quickly XD i was shocked hehehe i send you much inspiration and lovely, brooding thoughts in hopes that they help you write quickly n_n lmao
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 20:50 CST
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KILL 'EM ITACHI! GRRR! HOW DARE THAT MAN HURT ARASHI-CHICHI! *cough* updates are wonderful.
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Title: gah!
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happened?! is he dead?! i'll dieee! i need to know! all this time waiting and this is what you post ;-; lol i can't wait to read more >.< happy new year!
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 17:26 CST
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O.O Arashi?! NOOOOOOOOO! And yet you must update! *sobs* Arashi....
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Reviewed By: shattered.words On: October 11, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. That muse of yours does what it wants huh? Don't worry, I have the same problem. Good job on this. I enjoyed the bittersweet moment.
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Title: x3
Reviewed By: _Bob On: September 29, 2008 01:17 CDT
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Nyahhh. x3 The glare was so~ cute. It made me squee in real life.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Naruto1 On: August 09, 2008 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always liked your style keep up the good work. I egarly anticapate the next chapter(s).
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Reviewed By: Rasalynn_lynx On: March 16, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awesome and hilarious! I love it, get around to updating!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:23 CST
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these are so sweet! i especially love competition...lil sasuke is so kawaii!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG I love this its so cute and just...really good! I am absolutely ravonious for updates I sure hope you carry this all the way to when they are older...please?
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please write more! They are too CUTE! I love it! Update for a new fan please?
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Reviewed By: crescent-moon-demon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW...they're so CUTE!! if only sasuke hadn't been such a meanie poor naru wouldn't have 2 cry.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 10:25 CDT
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I love it the mini-hokage and Kyuubi nice touch, I do have to agree it is alarming to picture naru-chan so obessed with foxes. Otherwise great story!!
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Reviewed By: A bee in your bonnet. On: October 15, 2007 01:24 CDT
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*lesqueal* this is an awesome series! I love the chibi characters. You have a great style in writing.
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 17:09 CDT
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Morae I love this series! I have read them all several times because you captured everything little-kidness and umphed it up with all of the little quirks of the characters.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 07:30 CDT
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I really enjoy this story because so much of Naruto's childhood is glanced over. A child like him could worm his way into any heart. Even someone as reclusive as Kakashi isn't safe, as this last chapter proved rather well. This is great work. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved Naruto pulling Kakashi's mask down it was cute and how so like him to ask those questions that way. Great chapter as always looking forward to the next but my all time fav's are the Kakashi/Naru and Sasu/Naru.
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Title: So Fluffy!
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naru is so precious. This is possibly one of the fluffiest stories I have ever read. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 22:25 CDT
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These are so adorable keep em coming.
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Reviewed By: kyogre_latias [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God. Oh my God. I'm grinning stupidly at the screen right now, deciding whether or not to read the chapters again until I can draw a picture. That was cute. I swear.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that you where able to write this dispite your muses untimely demise maybe a little darkness is called for to motivate the muse! And if I could make a small request I would love to see another chapter with Itachi! Loved the chapter as always looking forward to the next!
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Title: cutie, cutie!
Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww~ really, really cute! i enjoyed reading it! i so want to cuddle naru-chan too! waaaahhh! write soon~ ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 01:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its so cute I love it!!!!
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THT WAS THE CUTEST STORIES IVE EVER READ IN MY 14 YEAR OLD LIFE!!!!!write more plz! just dont make Naruto's father die- tht would be really sad *pouts anyways- great story! *gives author gigantic cookie
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Reviewed By: Demon Wind Shuriken On: February 11, 2007 09:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome! Chibi Naruto is sooooo kawaii! You make Arashi sooo lovable! I absolutely love this! Amazing! Update sooon.... so I can be happy! ~Terra
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 17:40 CST
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I hope they dont some out to slowly I really like this its one of my fav! Keep up the good work!
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