| "The Little Mermaid" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 18:34 CDT
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You made me cry. This was just... one of the saddest stories I have ever read...EVER!!! *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Mika_san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 16:15 CDT
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A very touching story. It made me want to cry! How could Lord Sesshoumaru throw Rin away like that? Too bad she didn't have her voice, though...But anyways, your story is good, like always, and I look forward to reading your next story.
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Reviewed By: Just someone out there On: May 04, 2006 14:10 CDT
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This has got to be one of the best fanfiction retellings of The Little Mermaid I have ever read. You took the story and retold it almost as if you were the original author. The scenes with Naraku chilled me to the bone and Rin's transformation to human made me feel for her. So did the ending. How could Sesshoumaru just shove her aside like that?! He can be so damn oblivious sometimes, I swear! Anywho, great job on this and I hope you write more fics in the future. You're very talented!
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Reviewed By: june kazenora On: March 18, 2006 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very beautiful fanfic of au rin/sess. I typically don't like au's, but I really enjoyed this one. The original story of the little mermaid is a heartbreaking one, and this version is quite a tearjerker. Keep up the good work. I hope to see more fics like these.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: SakuxSakura On: March 02, 2006 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is The first inuyasha fic that I have ever read. you have me wanting to read more now lol. Very well done my dear. I hope to see more from you in the future dear.
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Reviewed By: Lady Desdemona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I loved your stories I read both of them. I started crying when I was reading. I don't normally like Sesshomaru and Rin together, but this was REALLY good. I've been reading fanfiction for over five years and this is one of the best Inuyasha fics I've ever read. Could you please e-mail me when you start another story? ~Desdemona my e-mail -> theladydesdemona@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: jinnandtonic23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The ending broke my heart! I wish the story had ended on the happy note like Disney's version, but I know that's not how it really is. Beautiful story!
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Reviewed By: Inaqui On: February 24, 2006 03:34 CST
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I'M BAWLING!Seriously, that was beautifully written. I love the way that you describe her undersea life, and I respect that you didn't compromise the story for a happy ending. It was really well done. I loved it.
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