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Reviewed By: anana945 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 20:57 CDT
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This entire story tortured me. With your fantastic cliffhangers and overall great storyline. I was literally at the edge of my seat. To be honest, i even cried a little. Throughout the story i was grabbing at my hair, biting my nails in nervousness. You should be published. I cant wait to read the sequal.
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Title: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn (logged out)
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an encrediable story, though I can figure why it wouldn't have many comments. You were brave to have a story like this circled around very descriptive rape, many people may take offence, or stop reading in disgust. Regardless I enjoyed it a lot, besides the harsh rape. Very well done, with quite a few mistakes, kept me on the edge of my seat. :)
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn (logged out) On: March 18, 2010 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely addicting story so far (I have found it a few years after it has been created, but I prefur that so I don't have to wait for updates :) ) I was wondering if you wanted me to fix up your writing for you. You have quite a few spelling, grammer and punctuation mistakes, no offence. It is always nice to read a fan fiction without being destracted by those small things. Just a small offer. :) My writing isn't nearly as good as yours, but my name on this website is Shaelyn-Bobaelyn, contact me if you wish.
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 18:59 CDT
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Awesome as alway's
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORY!!!I loved the way u ended it!I think u r an Excllent wirter!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. i just have to say that the story was amazing.. i think that you kept the characters real.. and i loved the way you wrote it.. it was beautiful.. it has been a while since i have read, a greatly written story such as this one.. and i just wanted you to know that!!! loved it and i can't wait to start on the sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fic was sooo goodXD i was hooked on it for days=D lolXP really great portrayal of the characters personalities...just wondering though what happened to koga? oh and i loved the part where kagome looked like kikyo at first when she was revived and then slowly as the life came back to her she became kagomeXD that was a nice touch=D great job!
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Title: Well Well...
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley LOVE Confrontation!!! Although it had it's weird parts and romantic 'Aww' parts, i still loved it. =) Only thing about this story that kinda bugged me was the whole Ayame thing. But i still loved it no matter what!! Keep the stories comming! You better believe i will be reading them!!
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:37 CDT
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THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! It's one of the best fic's I've ever read!!! NOT KIDDING! I saved it and am soo going to read it about 20 more times!
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Reviewed By: schung19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the few stories that actually made me cry. But I loved every chapter of it.
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I litterally spent an entire day reading this! that was quite a ride! my goodness. I about died when you said that Miroku's old gardian was sober for the ceremony that was so funny to me after all I don't think he's ever been sober in the show. lol But great job I look forward to reading the sequel! ty
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Reviewed By: Genie666_28 On: June 07, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was amazing! I don't think I've read anything else that has kept me reading for more then an hour ( I'm serious! I've been up since 11pm last night reading this! I need some sugar real badly!) I'm glad you wrote this fic and i hope you have inspiration to write another one. You should be really proud of yourself because you have such geart writting talent -- one that people would love have. Once again, good work hun.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Wi[n]e On: April 15, 2007 21:35 CDT
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hmmm i got a question. if the well was destroyed in the feudal era wouldn't the future be changed? like kagome would never fall in the well and meet inuyasha right?
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Title: End of story review
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your original plot bunnies must have been male and female, because this story errupted with various plot bunnies galore. All created to making this one hell of a story. Some parts were confusing, but you managed to smooth them out. You touched on a subject that i wondered about briefly in the last chapter, about Ayame and Kouga.. Maybe you can explain what happened to him *kouga* in your sequel, ne? But im so glad we got our Kagome/Inuyasha lemon in the end. and it was a tasteful lemon too. Im going to take a break right now and rest my eyes, i've been reading this story for non stop since yesterday afternoon. But once im finished, im going to go on and read the first part of your sequel. Keep up the good work, Autumn
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Title: chpt 44 review
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 21:40 CDT
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*SCREAMS IN DENIAL* nooooooooooo! okay, i know that this story is done, and i have more chapters to read, but i have to comment on this one particular chapter. Im crying. Real tears, not just a figure of speech. The ending of that chapter is just too much angst and heartbreak... Damn. okay i need to find out if they all die now, so.. until i finish :( *weeps*
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