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| "Caught In the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jazz21 On: April 11, 2009 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fanfic and it also seems to have some mystery. please write another chapter.
| Reviewed By: arenoid On: July 21, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This beginning part, as short as it may be, is great but there's one minor mistake. Joshua was the younger sibling. Rosette was his older sister. As in the series, "Older sister make the voices stop!" Well anyways nice story!
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