| "Oh, Dear." Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
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Reviewed By: meyersk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also, for some strange reason like seeing daisuke injured because I like him so much. I'm weird, I know.
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Reviewed By: meyersk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also, for some strange reason like seeing daisuke injured because I like him so much. I'm weird, I know.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus (Not logged in) On: June 22, 2010 00:21 CDT
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Wow, it's been awhile since this was updated huh? I really glad to see you working on it, I really enjoy this story. The so many different elements that you're weaving together, great dialog (internal and external), and true to life, fun to read characters make this a wonderful read.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged in) On: September 15, 2008 00:40 CDT
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Gah! Poor Dai! But still, I love seeing him injured because I love him so much. I know I know, odd. I'm rather intrigued by Dark's aura change, and am eager to learn more. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus (not logged on) On: October 24, 2007 23:23 CDT
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AIDS! Thats the best reason ever! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ZGMF X-19A Infinite Justice [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is a really good one so far :) I wonder whats going to happen in the next chapter
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Title: AL!!
Reviewed By: sissa On: April 21, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool baut enough with the german already, I can't read it. It's a very interesting alternate reality fanfic, but some of it's slightly confusing, Oh, and Krad as matchmaker is hilarious!!! Oh, and Alphonse too!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus (lazy right now) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 18:40 CDT
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Nice story, but could you fix the paragraphing in the latter two chapters? And don't fret about talk, good dialog can add a lot to a story.
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 18:18 CST
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*reads chapter 5 oh XDD not aladdin XD* Shakespeare... oh yeah! The villian from Othello! ^__^ *english class pays off! XD*
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! *claps happily!* What a wonderful story ^___^ I hope to read more soon~! ^___^ hmmm... *thinks* isn't Iago the parrot from Aladdin? *thinks*
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