| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 02, 2006 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! new chappie! miroku is so walking on thin ice with sango. i am really impressed with your characterization for these two, they are really true to form. i hope that with kagome and sesshy's help, inuyasha can work through some of his insecurities. he is strong and he is wanted and loved now, he just needs to accept it and he'll become stronger. if the nasty little toad imp can do that to him, i wonder what would happen if kikyou showed up and started in on the worthless halfbreed comments and tried to guilt him about how he can't even keep his promises to her (even though she's the walking dead and has many questionable methods for making the world a better place without the jewel). his youkai is content with his mate and pack, now his human half needs to come to terms with everything. and the others really need to work on jumping to conclusions still. sango's response to the "What a dog..." comment leads me to think that one of these times (possibly on the full moon if not before) she's going to try and sneak out and confront inuyasha. i don't think she really believed kagome when she said she was just sore, especially since she never experienced sex herself. inu's already afraid of what he did and not giving kagome a break, all he needs is sango to blow up at him, too. i like the pace you're setting for this, everything is given time to come into light and work itself through. with the addition of kaede and shippou back at the village, not to mention the loss of privacy, i'm sure things will get very touch and go. wonerful as always and it leaves me waiting for more! (man i was just signed in and it kicked me out. grrrr)
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter keep up the good work..please update soon
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 08:46 CDT
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my my sesshy is the little peeping inu! he complains about a lack of sleep but then he spends the night watching (well listening)! although i admit it was sweet of him to look out for his little brother when he was...ah, occupied. i liked how you gave inu's demon side some time to himself. his human half gets a night and it's only fair that his demon side does as well. last chapter i was so proud of inu for taking it on himself to talk to miroku about his relationship with sango. he's really showing his authority as pack leader, even with the elder inu around. and kirara! why do i have the feeling she's going to have to play babysitter a few times before miroku gets ahold of himself? will inu tell him when it's safe to be with sango or will he keep telling the monk to keep it under wraps until they find naraku? miroku may not be able to restrain himself when he has to if he gets sango in bed. he may have just earned himself a separate room in a separate hall in sesshy's castle if kirara tattles! maybe sesshy should put the monk next door to him and kag and inu farther away so he can sleep! and how lazy can jaken get? he slept through everything, no wonder he gets left behind. will they pick up shippo before they head off to the west or will poor kaede still have to kit sit? and will the kitsune really take to inu as pack leader or will he have some adjusting to do? beautiful work and i'm so glad to be back and able to read it! the minion eagerly awaits more!
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 28, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!..Nikkie gets dry ice and factory-strength fan places both into bathroom..turns on fan.. then steps into a ice cold shower and tries vainly to cool herself off..Full youkai Inuyasha lovin'...Soooo Hoooootttttt!!! Darn that Kagome is some Lucky girl. I bow, take of my hat, then proceed to give you a standing ovation. That was sooo delicious Literary Goddess. Sooo Hootttt!! You have the most amazing way with writing it is just so awesome. The descriptiveness, the flow of the words, the heart and soul that goes into the making of this masterpiece!! I can't find all the words to describe how much I admire your talents!! Awesome! Amazing! Totally Righteous!! Bravissmo!! Bravissmo!! Encore!! Encore!! and my favourite word... Splendiferious!!!! I liked, no loved that Sesshoumaru respected their needs but remained to protect them. I thought it was so possessively cute when I read about Inuyasha throwing growls off into Sesshoumaru's direction. I love how they tie together and Kagome accepts as just another part of Inuyasha. How she shows that she understands Inuyasha in all he does and says. Though I do wonder... Wth the way Inuyasha is So very incredibly stubborn and refuses to back down from anything... Will his Youkai seed have the same characteristics? Also will Kagome also override the effects of the birth control with her powers, her unconditional love for Inuyasha and desire to bear his childern. I so liked with the infamous fundoushi!! That was funny. I think Sesshoumaru's jaw fell onto the floor of his mind as he was floored by their stamnia. Will there be a mention of Spring time-the mating season for most hot blooded beings? And WHOOTTT!!! to Kirara!! I can just see Miroku shrivel up at that heart stopping fright. To go from having sex to seeing massively long and sharp teeth and an overly powerful set of jaws in ones face is a true mood shattering method. Way to go Girl!!.. err.. Kitty??.. What an amazing chapter this was to read!! I also enjoyed how Sesshoumaru told about his decision with the village and with him taking the Inu-gami to his home for more help and talks about Inuyasha's new powers. I love it!! How I postively adore your writings!! Your stories!! Please keep up the most excellent and super work!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I have my fingers crossed for your stories!!
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH ANOTHER AWSOME CHAPETR GREAT JOB I love your writting, your storys are the best ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens WOOOOT!
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME JOB I LVOED IT! I love Sesshoamru! Awsome job on this chapetr it was very well written and the plot was awsome keep it up
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Title: HI AGAIN!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...what stamina thoses two have AWSOME! LOVE THE LEMON! Kagome is one lucky bi...I eman nice chapetr^_^"
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Title: HELLO!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH RUN KAGOME RUN! I knew that was going to happen *SIgh* -_- Anyway nice job I loved it so MUCH ^_^ INUASYAH WERE ARE YOU GET YOUR ASS BACK THERE AND SAVE YOUR MATE!
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Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH GREAT JOB! Sorry I didn't read your story sooner I've been really busy, but great job I looe it MATANE!
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Title: awsome!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue not signed in On: April 26, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great chapter. i really cant wait till your next chapter. you know it would be really funny if inuyasha did truly breed kagome i mean what if his demon side was just that strong and no birth control would work what would they do? how over protective would inu be then? anyway update again soon.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 23:49 CDT
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Yes Live And let die definitley deserves the guild for best Lemon, I so Love your stories, they kick ass, or rock whichever you prefer.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:13 CDT
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I love it YOU ROCK
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you showed what happens to Inuyasha on his full moon night now that he's mated. Poor Kagome, as much fun as it is, I'd have to say that at a certain point she'd have to get pretty tired! She better watch that moon cycle closely so she can rest up before another night like THAT. I wonder how the others will take to Sesshomaru's offer to take them to his castle. That should be an interesting interlude. Poor, poor Shippo. Will he ever get to see them again or will he be stuck with Kaede? I think she needs a bit of a break for his energy, don't you think? And Miroku better watch himself. He can't become a daddy just yet. It just would not do for him to have a little Miroku running about. Nice save by Kirara, even if it did upset Sango at first. Can't wait to see what happens next and where you go with this.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another great chapter. I love the part when Miroku just forgot what InuYasha told him but he butt was save by Kirara (good kitty). Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: chapter 9 &10
Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 24, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Literary Goddess. I am very, beyond happy with this story/sequel. I had just finished reading chapters 9 and 10 and wow. I must say. I needed a pretty darn cold shower and bath after that. It is really a beautiful example of your delightful talent!! What a nice treat you gave us with the scene with Jaken in the inn when he got served a meal. I believe you have captured him nicely and basically true to form. Yes, he is a rude creep, a jerk and over-obnoxious to a hissy fit, but thank you for having him being respectful and considerate. Thank you for treating him as a person. I am in awe of how you so readily grasp the characters in their glory and keep them so true so real!! I loved the progression of each couples realtionships. It is so true, so realistic. Prefect!! The lovemaking between Inuyasha and Kagome so totally wow... Kagome turning into quite the little sex kitten for Inuyasha.. giggles.... and the tenderness and learning for Sango from Miroku. very nice. And Sesshoumaru. Kudos!!You have him written prefectly as well. Thank you for having Sesshoumaru working to help the village under his care!! Thank you for bringing Myoujou back again!! I like her!! And I wish I could hit Miroku. He just had to cruelly tease Inuyasha again. What a jerk. Ah well I think Inuyasha will be able to get back at him with interest!! laughs evilly. Inuyasha is really showing himself to be very mature and very intelligent. By telling Miroku to keep it in his pants and giving his reasons why. Though I can honestly see Miroku trying to abuse this knowledge for his own gains. Since he now knows Sango is fertile. So Inuyasha is the one with the untapped powers. Right on!! What a delicious twist!! I don't think nor remember if I ever came across a story in which Inuyasha had hidden powers that he doesn't know about. What a treat!!! Thank you!! Rock on!! Will Myoujou be having some cubs? or have a humanoid form? What new troubles lurk in the future for our favourite Inu-gumi!! And was that a big clue when Myoujou mentioned someone could use Kagome's heart and powers to hurt her? I love the way you write!! Thank you for sharing this with us!! Please keep up the most excellent and spectacular work!! Can't wait for the next installment!! And my fingers are crossed for your nominations!!
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