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| "10 Seconds" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 06:59 CDT
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*rubs hands together* Ch6-7! A lot has happen atleast in the development of Heero. So Duo stayed with him most of the night, Duo showing an interest in him more than what he had before, isn't that what he wanted? and now he's considering stopping the development? What happen on the mission, why did Heero freeze up like that and remain that way even after Duo got them back? Did this whole pursuit to get Duo to fall in love with him, unlock emotions he had kept hidden, so much so that he was left in a stupor when he unconsciously realized it? Well that's all speculation but there's more story to read ne? ^_^ you really are a wonderful writer, thanks for sharing.
| Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I found this fic a little while earlier, but then I had not signed up, and today I came across it again...and you had updated. I was very impressed. This fic is beautifully wrote and the plot is really good too. I want that book. I can understand why its such an interesting read. They touched awwww I think that means duo likes him too ney? Also what did Heero say errr Duo finially touches him and he doesnt remeber or respond to it. *sigh* Men! Please don't leave me hanging here I really would love to hear more. Sayonara for now x
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 14:22 CDT
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Yes! Finally! They touch! You know, any other story I would be dissapointed that they only touch but with yours, I am so extatic it's not really funny. I would have reviewed earlier, namely last night, but it wouldn't let me. -grumbles.- I love how you wrote this chapter though, it was so sweet and it shows that Duo actualy does care about Heero. I am kind of curious to know where Duo cleaned his finger off though..o_O After he had smeared the make up on Heero's cheek. It's weird, but it wouldn't stop bugging me. ¬¬ Don't ask, please, I swear you won't understand either. I feel that this story might be drawing to a close, and that gives me a mix of emotions. Happiness...because we get to see how it ends, and then sadness because it is ending. -shrugs- Like I said, weird. Ja!
| Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 20:38 CDT
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A page! You write such a great story and you keep me fed on a page?! ARGH! You are evil, and brilliant. For the love of it, UPDATE! I know you're probably busy, and even though this one page was more effective than ten of mine I still want a update. For...I have nothing to swear by, but just please don't leave your reader's like this. We'll go crazy and our reviews will make even less sense than this one does and you do NOT want to see that, I promise you. Why are you still reading. Update! Yes I'm pushy. Its your fault for being awesome. Go on. SHoo. Write, find your muse. Get a cookie.
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 17:38 CDT
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I have never read a fic like this. I don't know what it is about how you write Heero's Point of view, but I like it and find that it accents what he does and how he does it. It reminds me of something else I read, someone being so curious that they take things and make expiriments out of ordinary things like the face. I do think that it would have been more believeable if the story had taken place after the war, considering the impact this would have on Heero's and Duo's relationship. But I am not sure if you are going to change the story line of the series or not. So I cannot fully put my weight into that claim. Like I said before, i could see Heero being one of those people who expiriment with small things like holding eye contact. I am eager to see what will happen with Duo. I might be a little more curious as to how you are going to write Duo. I know some authors who write him as an airhead and such things, and that is not a bad thing, but I find it unbelieveable since he is a major person in a war and cannot afford such handicaps. Good job with the story. Ja!
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 09:11 CDT
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I'm not entirely sure what's going on, but I like it... yeah. Update!
| Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 08:12 CDT
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I love your Heeros', you animated them so well. This is interesting and I'd like to know where Duo went myself. Prehaps he was caught and sent the Principle's office based on how the teacher, didn't seem to spend too much time discerning about Duo's absence? Or prehaps the teacher had him removed from his class? Or maybe the school has Ozzies/Ozzy loyalist among the teachers and they decided to investigate, with a little one on one question session, why Duo wasn't doing any work and always sleeping during the study period, because the teacher never seems to notice/care? But it was odd that he noticed Heero about to leave though the other students did the same, heero didn't need to have Duo's skill if he was being watched. *arches brow* Update soon!
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 22:19 CDT
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I'm glad that I decided to start to read this fanfic ^-^ I really like it. I enjoy this plot and the ideas behind it and I'm really looking forward to see how you pull this off ^-^ I'll be looking for next chapter ~KIM~
| Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:32 CDT
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I demand update, like always, this is wonderous. Perfectly gorgeous, I don't know how you do it. You are genius...update? Please? I gave you the warm fuzzies and everything! ^-^ I love this. And I have no idea why. Oh how thin the line between passions, and how long 10 seconds!
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