| "His Former Boyfriend" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Miley-Chan On: October 28, 2008 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aieee! It can't be over....I love it too much! I like how the samurai sword just kept on popping at regular intervals. At first I thought Ryu was being a big jerk to Tats and so I was kinda rooting for a Tats/Hiro fic, but as it went on I knew that Ryu was just being possessive and felt like he was just losing Tats. He loves Tats really...I can see it. Although I didn't like how he could manipulate and sometimes intimidate Tats...it was almost like he was threatening him half the time...until I read the ending and I was all like 'KAWAII!'. The characters are all so believable and very IC. Gah! I loved it!!!
| Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: princessflame91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was just... wow. Your writing style is amazing, and the plot was nice and thick. Wow. I love the way how the ending was completely unexpected, yet if one had watched carefully enough, the signs the foreshadowed it could have been seen. Just amazing. The characters were all really deep, too. I began with hating Ryuichi, but as the plot went on, I could only sympathize with a boyfriend who was trying so hard not to lose his love to an old flame. However, the beginning of the story was a bit weak compared to how the story was in the end. Your writing improved a lot, and I could tell that you were getting a better feel of the characters and how you wanted them to act. The Disneyland scenes, well, at least some of them, irritated me, because of their complete goofiness. But then, comic relief is always needed in a good story, so that's entirely excusable. Actually, thinking back, now, that part was strong in it's own sense, and tied in very nicely with the story. All in all, fantastic job on this piece! I'm going to go and check out if you have any other works out, now. Great job, and keep it up! Signed, PrincessFlame91
| Reviewed By: shadowCrow On: May 03, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a perfect ending, esp. for Ryu and Tatsuha. Hiroshi really is a poor, hapless barstard, isn't he? Simply one of the best Gravitation fics ever. Characters handled with care, on one hand still recognizable but with added deapth and very human (esp. the faults!). Love the fact that you kept general feel of Gravitaion (weird humour and situations/heavy emotional drama). Great read. :)
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: May 02, 2007 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
i shouldn't have said hate in the first review. i really meant that i feel *thinks a minute* apprehensive. yes, that's it. hate just sounded wrong to me. >.
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: May 02, 2007 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate to see a story that i've become so involved with end. it always gives me mixed feelings. i mean, i'm happy for the author because it's complete and they can move on, but i am left feeling a bit sad and empty since there are no new chaps to wait for. : ( hopefully you will continue to write because each of your fics have me laughing like no tomorrow and i swear i am always hooked by the first paragraph! this fic in particular i loved for its element of surprise. i had no idea how it would end and even what you had planned for each chap. i thought that hiro's battle to regain what he had with tats and his struggle to find himself was very intense and i really felt bad for him toward the end... because everyone thinks they want 'something' so badly, but end up getting 'something' even better without knowing it... at first(especially when they think their world is crumbling). i loved that about this. it was very real to me. ^_^ thanks for sharing and i look forward to more from you! *crosses fingers*
| Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 14:30 CDT
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.... It's... over? B-but, I don't understand. How can it be over? I mean... it's just not fair. Please, tell me there's a sequel. There's a sequel, right? *nudge, nudge* Ya know, I started to get K/Hiro vibes way back when... but I thought it was just my imagination so I pushed it aside. Looks like my intuition was right on the money. Though a part of me really, really wished that Tatsuha and Hiro could have gotten back together, even if I knew it was an impossible venture. But... there's got to be a sequel. Cause there's stuff left unsaid. Like Hiro confronting Shuichi about everything and his daughter and Hiro and K's budding relationship... so there's a sequel, right? It was a great story. I *sniffle* to see it end. Now I have to go re-read it to make me feel better.
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 29, 2007 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my. that was such an intense chap. i never would have thought ryu would go that far. poor hiro. but, does he really care about tats, or ayaka, or anyone? i am kinda confused. but maybe ryu has him confused, he's good at that. lol but i want him to be happy, and i want tats to be happy, too. thank god for k, tho. he was just in time. man, what is hiro gonna do now? ahhh, this sucks. did shuu and fujisaki really send that to everyone? i mean, how did they get those recordings and stuff? especially, why would they have a recording of themselves plotting against hiro? >.
| Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 13:17 CDT
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Wow... so much is happening that I can hardly digest it all. So much betrayal and stuff going on behind the scenes. I don't know /who/ did /what/ anymore, lol. I might have to read this over again, a lot more carefully instead of greedily and quickly devouring it. Another great chapter. Can't wait to see how it builds up and explodes!
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 12, 2007 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, ryuichi wouldn't kill hiro, would he? ack, ryu seems crazy enough... this is gonna be major. what about ayaka? i am still hoping for a happy ending, but this seems to be getting to the point of no return, for that possibility. i love those two together and i thought the couch session was great. threw me off a bit at first when tats was top, i thought hiro would be. hehehe, cool!! good job. t.c
| Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, things are coming to a head. I liked the part where Hiro said he wasn't necessairily a good man like everyone wanted to believe. It was a good little aside. I'm very much looking forward to what's coming up next. (I get excited every time I see this has updated).
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 29, 2007 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, another cliffy doing it's job too well of driving me nuts 'till the next update. very nicely done, especially the whole samurai bit. i didn't know any of that... except, i did know that the japanese were very 'into' napes, necks and collarbones but wasn't sure why. anyway, i learned something new. ^ ^ thanx. i wonder how this whole 'no regrets' night is gonna turn out. or, if ryu will get home early. X_X hope not. these guys needed to grow a little, and i hope things work out eventually, somehow. they are so cute. not to mention smexy! lol
| Reviewed By: leila-chan ~nsi~ On: March 21, 2007 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah... not fair! that was such a cliffy. btw, how the heck does shuu know that hiro needs to see tats? i guess there's more to shuu than just cute, pink hairness. O.o so, will hiro commit homicide with kumaguro, or will he return him unscathed? lol and what will happen when hiro sees tats again? i hope you update soon. this was leading up to something and then, bam, it's the end of the chap. : ( i need to KNOW. take care.
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 08, 2007 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh hell, hiro's in trouble now, if tats has his mind set. this chap was kinda sad and dammit, that necklace just HAD to be n the way, didn't it? lol i am really anticipating tats following through with his vow and what the result will be. hiro is such a tragic guy. he just needs a hug, from tats. XD *still laughing over tats throwing that snake head away and trying to stuff it in the trash* bwahahahahahahaha gawdang that was funny shit!
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: February 15, 2007 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know why, but my mind has completely slipped over what the heck was on the c.d that ryuichi had. was it from the amusement park? damn, i need to reread some chaps. gawd, how awful of me... and i'm the biggest(self-proclaimed)fan of this fic!!! *shame* anyway, hiro was born under a bad star, it seems. i hope things pick up for him soon. he is so sweet. ha, and tats kicking the snakes head in the trash made my day. funny! and yes, ryu's real self is quite scary indeed. and interesting as hell. ^ ^ take care and thanks for the update. p.s at first, i really thought the spray of blood was hideki's, not britney's. ugh, i was freakin'! XD
| Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 15:15 CST
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Whew, that was a stunningly climactic chapter. My eyes were wide and I couldn't help but bounce in my seat. It was as if everyone had suddenly gone insane and now I just have to know what happens next. Please, oh please, update soon. I am in love with this story and Hiro/Tatsuha is a pairing I never considered before and now I love it!
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