| "Just as I am" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: I do like the story
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good, I wanted to writed a review, though I am in chapter one. Its refreshing to find a story with depth. Keep it up.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is a really great fanfic. I enjoyed it emensly (cant type today.lol) I seriously hope that there are many more chapters to come!!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really a great fan fic, I have read all nine of them, and enjoyed them emensly. (can't spell today.lol) I serioulsly hope there is a chapter 10..maybe more.!!!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really a great fan fic, I have read all nine of them, and enjoyed them emensly. (can't spell today.lol) I serioulsly hope there is a chapter 10..maybe more.!!!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really a great fan fic, I have read all nine of them, and enjoyed them emensly. (can't spell today.lol) I serioulsly hope there is a chapter 10..maybe more.!!!
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Reviewed By: XRYSTAL89 On: July 05, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful fight scene. Absolutely beautiful. One of the more unique ones!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: July 05, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even like bloody fight scenes but your husband did an excellent job. What was raidon thinking, nut.. Oh it's the worst death, the poor man will probably die at least 3 times. That's kinda scary if you're married to a guy like that. It's a good story. Keep writing...
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara not logged in heh On: July 05, 2006 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ ho man i forgot to review b4... heh i put ur story in my favorets and forgot to review... srry...i really like your story alot and keep the story going!! its really good... but wow nice last chapie... heh im kinda scared of ur husband now.... if he was sessy... help.....
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Title: first time?
Reviewed By: crissy-cris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your first story or your first inu story? Either way pat yourself on the back because this is one of the more enjoyable "first time" stories I've read. Only one piece of advice, take it or don't, break up the big paragraph into smaller ones and have your dialogues seperate from the paragraphs. Otherwise good job.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: kenpanyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you are doing a wonderful job especially since this is your first fanfiction. Please update soon. Will you introduce Inuyasha in the next chapter?
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Title: Just as I am
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 On: May 01, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where your going with this story, but one thing bothers me. Was the concealment charm meant to change Sesshoumaru's hair color? I don't know if I could get used to a dark haired Sess. I miss his silky silver locks already -_-' other than that I like your story. I can even get over the fact that it's not a Sess/Rin ensamble ^-^.
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