| "VOLUME I: It's All About Her: All You Can Eat" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: hamaya_miko_kagz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's SO HOT! I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a verry DIIIIIIIIIRTY lemon!! Ecchi, hentai, Authoress!! I cant wait to read the next two!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A very horny Ookami, Suriya
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Title: AWSOMEEEEZZ
Reviewed By: Inulittlesis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMgosh!!!!!! This story is very hawt, very hawt and raw n dirty it was was .......PURRRFECTO lolz anyway yay this was hot i can't wait for voulme 2 this is one of the best lemons i have read by far keep up the good lemony work u seem to have n act but i agree with some there should be more dirty talk all your story brought up memories with my on and off bf *goes to la la perverted dreamland* oops sorry well anyway dreamboy is callin n can't keep him waiting toodles
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Title: Rikku-chan
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLLY SHIZNICKS!!!!!1 that was freaken hot!!!! I got a little wet reading it...OMg it was one of the best lemons I have ever read..well keep up the good work!!! (Leaves to go make a booty call)
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
o.o....wow...That was one of the best lemons I have ever read......and it got me a lil wet too! lol. I would love to read more of your lemons, so KEEP UP THE GOOD FUDGING WORK! YEEHAW!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! Keep cumming wit more lemons like that and I'll keep reading them. This was one of the hottest stories I've read. Hey just don't let the finish so fast and let them be a bit more verbal (more dirty talk). Till next read see ya (jumps up and makes a booty call).
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!! Really hot and it is one of the best lemons I have ever read! The next chapter should have some anal though!!
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was pretty hot. I mean you did explain a little about Kagome and Inuyasha being married and what they did for a living but is Inuyasha a demon or human. Does he have his demon characteristics or human ones. Other than that it was pretty good. I just couldn't fully get into it not knowing what Inuyasha looked like. Kagome usually always looks the same unless someone changes here look. But Inuyasha has different ones.
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