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| "Love, Rage, and Sorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Silver Exio On: September 29, 2006 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far Cody, the only words I get coming into my mind as I read the chapters at current time is PERFECTION. That, (by my standards) is not an overexaggeration of any sort. When I read them, all I see are the characters, I feel what they feel. I can sense the tension arising. I am wondering what the next womve will be. I am observing the room. I am literally there, if only in my mind anyway. Everytime I end your chapters, I feel like to cry, because I want to know what's gonna happen next you know. But when I get a new chapter, I'm filled with exitement and glee so I guess it's all even. But anyway, I just wanted to say. keep up the great work. I can't wait for the rest.
| Title: I'm impressed
Reviewed By: Spiked Blonde Stampede On: August 02, 2006 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
C, I'm impressed with this work. Anno pretty much gives you enough data for each character, it's just that a person needs to see it. He's placed it right there, it's all about one's will to see it. You've caught on, and your fanfic is pretty good - considering it's your first Eva fic. Very perceptive, nice work. Proceeding to read the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 10:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sad to hear that it will take a while for you to update. Wonder what will happen now. Hope Shinji and Asuka will talk soon. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Ragnaroek On: July 01, 2006 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice, I like the flow so far, good use of descriptions at the begining. As an avid A/S fan I'm looking forward to read more from this fic.
| Reviewed By: Blackfallout On: June 30, 2006 13:03 CDT
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Very good keep writing.
| Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far so good. I like the SxA pairing as well and share your opinion about Asuka. Keep it up.
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