| "Apparition" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2009 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an intriguing story! Hope you update soon. I'm curious as to who that mysterious faceless person is, but I have a feeling that I knoe who it is.
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Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: almost brain dead On: August 27, 2008 21:16 CDT
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I'm going to need to buy new socks or something! You keep rocking them to pieces! I'm SO glad you updated! I was just browsing my old favorites and finding out you updated was like Christmas early! Once again, your new chapter is stinkin' wonderful. I'm waiting with bated breath to see what happens next. (Like literally waiting with bated breath- I'm holding my breathe until you update so do it quickly! Jk, that's a lie, but I really do love your story and hope you can find it in your heart to update soon!) I really think your characterization of Sasuke is right on, which I imagine was really hard writting AU. And I think Naruto being insecure about not knowing who his dad was and all that really added emotional depth. Such an awsome job!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 08:11 CST
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Cool I liked the part with his Tattoo I look forward to reading more!
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Title: You rock my socks
Reviewed By: almost brain dead On: December 24, 2007 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say except you rock my socks! I'm pretty dang excited for the next chapter; you're story is so original, and it flows suprisingly well considering how diffrent it is from the manga. So... update soon please! =D
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAYAY I am so glad you updated great chapter looking forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: February 23, 2007 12:54 CST
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i like how this is going, its different, very different. I can't wait to read more chapters.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 21:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it Naruto into computers is a big difference you shoudld keep going with this!
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 17:22 CDT
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This is an intriguing story and I hope to see more. It's kind of hard seeing Naruto near a computer, much less knowing how to operate one, but you managed to make it work. Your writing style is, again, awesome, and the only thing this story is lacking are details. It felt like there were a couple of holes, like it was only part of larger story, not a stand-alone one-shot. All in all, a good read.
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Title: You better...
Reviewed By: TRESS On: July 16, 2006 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
You better continue this because well for one I haven't seen anything like it and two, I like the way you right so yeah. Please continue! Ps. sorry I didn't sign in and review
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