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Reviewed By: Littlekunai On: February 06, 2010 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far i've enjoyed your fanfic throughout the whole story. Gaara/Naruto is one of my all time favorite yaoi pairings. i wonder if naruto will find out about Gaara and Sasuke? Will he be hurt? Will he be ok? The characters are all IC and the detail is good. update when you can please?
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so I just read this all the way through and I wqas planing on doing a review for at lest ever 4 to 5 chapters but got so sucked in to it I forgot to got to review and kept going to the next chapter... so i'm just going to tell you that I really like how you don't have them set on who get's and who gives. im texting this all out so srry 4 it beingging so short a rivew and for all the errors. this fic has gotten my phone taken from me a cuple of times cuz they think im texting...
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Title: Truly one of the best
Reviewed By: Milana_asmozo On: March 06, 2009 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many things I want to say, though I think a few of the things that's running through my head would be enough. First of all, I've read the whole story in just a few days since it captured me completely. Your writing style, as well as that it is well written with only few mistakes here and there, makes it pleasant to read. (If a story is poorly written I tend to drop it after a few chapters since It gives me a headache to read) The plot is typical romantic but it gives one a nice tender feeling inside and it doesn't make one cringe as certain other romance lovey dovey fluffy… ugh… I think you get the picture. I especially love the way you portray Gaara in this story, he is exactly the way I imagine him to be after the "revelation" Naruto gives him. Naruto is a naïve ditz, though with quite a few improvements, just the way we love him, and Sasuke is a childish bastard, which is strangely enough also how we like him. I don't think I have anything else to say right now but may drop another review later to voice my thoughts of improvement or (if it will ever happen) lack of it or even worse a reduction of the story's quality (Eh.. Yeah… Or something). Anyway keep up the great work, I'll be waiting for the next update. ^^ ~Milana~ Ps. I forgot to mention how I simply LOVE the fact that the boys stay as boys and one of them doesn't turn in to some sort of girl in disguise as a boy. (I am referring to how yaoi fan-girls often see it fit that one of them has to be the "girl" (uke) in a relationship and they become an annoying whinny bitch)
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Reviewed By: divinlydemonic On: March 06, 2009 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgomgomg i love this story now and forever and it is now my absolute favorite story of all time write more soon
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Reviewed By: frostywonder On: March 02, 2009 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, poor boys - so confused with themselves! Two wonderfully written chapters. You make their interactions plausible and realistic, so I enjoy that factor. =) Amazing job!
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Reviewed By: Meli Christophorous On: March 02, 2009 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent question, naruto, really excellent...damn, how to explain this one... heh, smebody's gonna be in deep shit. looks like the issues just keeep piling up one after the other, huh? can't wait for the next chapter. like, i *really* just cannot wait. this, this is gonna be good...ja ne. Meli-chan.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bwlj - bookwormloverjen not logged in On: March 01, 2009 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I wish that there was a rating of 100. I am truly thrilled to see new chapters, and even more thrilled to read them. Anything worth the wait has got to be worth it, and I believe it has!
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: biggest anime fan 3 (nli) On: February 28, 2009 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove you! I'm so happy to see TWO updates. Ahhhhh. I'm in heaven.
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Reviewed By: nufsinna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so pleased to see more of this story. Thank you so much for sharing more with us. Once again, Gaara and his twisted logic see right to the heart of the matter. His dissection of Sasuke and his anti-social behavior is painfully accurate. I like how this confrontation opens up some common ground for these two. And even though he has Naruto's heart in mind, is he really going to like it if Sasuke is nicer to Naruto? Pushing Sausuke to be a better friend to Naruto may not be the way to keep Naruto for himself. How could Naruto resist a Sasuke who respects him and opens up to him and just maybe shares his attraction? I am excited to see how all the sparring together will help Gaara and Sasuke work together as they rush to the battle. And as always, I will blissfully follow you down whatever path you see fit to put the three of them together. Surely once Naruto is back in town they could find more pleasant ways to work off all that tension. Again, thank you so much for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Meli Christophorous On: February 26, 2009 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
curious...very curious...who would've thought to see the adorable redheaded headcase giving the slightly...*off* uchiha good advice. and gaara's total, brutal honestly in facing his confusions, short-comings, and overall worries has to be admired. perhaps sasuke-kisama can learn something from him...perhaps where naruto is ticklish...but i digress...i can't wait till naruto gets back and some of sasuke's juicier issues get dragged out into the open. like his fascination with the blond and redhead's sex-life...lotsa fun that'll be...hoping for another update and soon...ja ne. Meli-chan.
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Reviewed By: surih On: February 18, 2009 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot! I can't wait for another chapter, this is by far one of the best stories I've read! ^_^
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter ! It was so good! cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Meli Christophorous On: November 16, 2008 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh....oh jesus. i chased this fic over three different sites in the last year and i must be dreaming cause you've actually updated. nope. i just pinched myself and it's real. holy crap. well, let's see. i LOVE this fic. it's the first naruto fic i ever read and it's still one of my ultimate favorites. shame shame for the ten months it took you to update, but blessings at the same time cause i know life sux and gets in the way and all that crap. hmm...yeah. i gotta say, you've probably written the one of the single most believable gaaras next to kishimoto-sensei himself *bows head in respect to his greatness*. i love how the relationship between naruto and gaara progressed and i truly hope the adorable-to-a-fault redhead isn't gonna get kicked to the curb for sasu-kisama. i really hate that guy, even if you've somehow manged to make him more bearable, he's still a complete douchebag. and should be shot. but that's my opinion. well, i can't wait for the next installment and i hope it comes SOON (not too subtle hint) and i hope this thing has a happy ending. i'm naru/gaara all the way, but if sasuke's gonna be involved...he should be the slave. heh. just my humble opinion. lots of love and many blessings. Meli-chan.
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Reviewed By: Meli Christophorous On: November 16, 2008 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh....oh jesus. i chased this fic over three different sites in the last year and i must be dreaming cause you've actually updated. nope. i just pinched myself and it's real. holy crap. well, let's see. i LOVE this fic. it's the first naruto fic i ever read and it's still one of my ultimate favorites. shame shame for the ten months it took you to update, but blessings at the same time cause i know life sux and gets in the way and all that crap. hmm...yeah. i gotta say, you've probably written the one of the single most believable gaaras next to kishimoto-sensei himself *bows head in respect to his greatness*. i love how the relationship between naruto and gaara progressed and i truly hope the adorable-to-a-fault redhead isn't gonna get kicked to the curb for sasu-kisama. i really hate that guy, even if you've somehow manged to make him more bearable, he's still a complete douchebag. and should be shot. but that's my opinion. well, i can't wait for the next installment and i hope it comes SOON (not too subtle hint) and i hope this thing has a happy ending. i'm naru/gaara all the way, but if sasuke's gonna be involved...he should be the slave. heh. just my humble opinion. lots of love and many blessings. Meli-chan.
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Title: Yaaaaaay!
Reviewed By: biggest anime fan 3 (nli) On: November 16, 2008 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness...I can now die happy! I'm so glad you updated! My most beloved fic is finally here. Yaaay!
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