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Reviewed By: Ren421 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2011 19:13 EDT
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Magnificent. Hope to see more. |
Title: Just finished 'Silence'!
Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle_Undercover On: July 30, 2011 15:22 EDT
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In case you're still monitoring this, just wanted to pop in and let you know that there are still happy readers! I took a long hiatus after 14, I guess. pleased to find a couple more chapters up and waiting for me! |
Reviewed By: Spikerix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2011 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only just discovered that you updated, thanks SO MUCH!!! I've loved this story for years and it's such a inmense joy to see new chapters again!!! I'm loving everything so far, no complaints at all! I can't wait to see how you're gonna resolve the situation, and I'm SO intrigued at how the threesome is gonna take place in all this (looking very much forward to it!! ;). :::sits and waits for next chapter::: thanks again for not abandoning this great and wonderful story! Kisses from Argentina. |
Title: Hellooo
Reviewed By: arwenia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2010 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Over and over again.! I love it so much I can barely breathe when you upload next chapter. I lay aside every book I read just for your story and I turn off every movie and everything. I hope you will continue soon. I am really happy I found this story, I love it so much and eventually I love you too for writing it. Please save my little mindless mind and write new chapter soon. Love u !!! |
Title: Also
Reviewed By: YugureIko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 22:58 EST
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I almost forgot. I really liked your ability to blend in so much humor along with all the romance and the drama and such. There are some parts that literally made me laugh out loud and almost wanna bang my head against a wall because I could actually see Gaara and Naruto and all of them doing stuff like that to the point that it's just priceless beyond any decent explanation. Like, Gaara going to buy lube at the beginning and just being outrageously specific and obvious. No shame whatsoever. "Where do you keep the lude? The kind used for anal sex." I nearly fell out of my chair. Thumbs up, man. |
Reviewed By: YugureIko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2010 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice and absorbing story. I had the same skepticism coming into this story as I do for most fanfics on any site - just doubting that the author could even seriously and believably pull off such a thing. So, when it's done very well and artfully, I'm always excited and happy, not only for myself but the author as well. I really enjoyed the entire story, so far. You did a very good job at keeping it all fairly believable even for a pairing that I couldn't believe would ever actually be cannon. You made an unlikely pairing(s) feel right and that can be very difficult to do. Also, I've gone back and reread their first love scene about 20 times. It's really nice and sweet. Very endearing and warmly done. Please update this story as soon as you possibly can. I can't wait to see how you make all of this work out. Wish I had criticism but I really don't right now aside from being more careful with your editing in some parts. Should I have better suggestions for the actual writing, I will post them in another review. Keep up the nice work!! |
Title: FABULOUS!
Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan3 (nli) On: October 15, 2010 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU! It's been sooo long since I read this that I rejoiced when I saw the update. Beautiful story as always. You are truly brilliant!
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Title: I adore you
Reviewed By: arwenia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2010 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am proud on you. You can still surprise me even if I know the whole story almost to recite it. :D I am really surprised because of this chapter. I thought you will continue with Sasuke, Naruto and Gaara. But you really included Kankurou. He is so sexy in his way, you know what I mean. I can see in my head all of his moves, smiles and words comming out of him. He really is special,... because you make him like this. I love Gaara too. His too deep thoughts, concern and love. His confuse and stillness, his quietness in every move. :) I love Gaara. I sometimes even dream about him. He is like a silent guardian angel, always there but not near visible. I love your story. Please continue soon. I push aside every book just to read your new chapter first.
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Title: Kankurou Is Teh AWESOME.
Reviewed By: Shiraume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 20:35 EDT
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ZOMG, I MAY DIE OF HAPPINESS!! I love you, and I love the new chapter! And Kankurou is THE AWESOME, holy crow, he kicks so much ass! And he's probably the only other person (aside from Naruto and maybe Temari) who has a chance of pulling Gaara out of the funk since, er, yeah, this is GAARA. ...So only Naruto and Sasuke to kick in the tail? That ought to be easy. /sarcasm But seriously? I am really looking forward to reading how you do that. Naruto I can kind of see coming around, but Sasuke's so deep in denial, he can't tell head from tail, pun intended. :) Delightful chapter, as usual, and so much love for you!
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Title: One Question
Reviewed By: arwenia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2010 14:39 EDT
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I want to ask you something, if you don't mind. Do you intend to write the story to the end? And if you do, will you write by your usual process-a chapter on a couple of months. I don't intend to be rude or to push you, I am just curious. I want to know if I log in every couple of months or every day as I am doing right now since you uploaded the last chapter. Thank you for your time and for your beautiful story I am so very much in love with it.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: arwenia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2010 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It is simply the best. I always dreamed about the trio Naruto/Sasuke/Gaara in the way they are now. I am a romantic soul and I appreciate that you feed my lust for emotions by writing another chapter. You are a queen with a big Q. Please write another chapter soon. And even if you won't I will just wait until you do :D. Have fun writing. Enjoyment factor is definitely above 10 :D
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Reviewed By: love_evil On: September 27, 2010 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's so much tension and so much emotion and you describe it all beautifully. I really felt like I was in the middle of it all. Your characters aren't one-dimensional at all - they're real and it pains me to see them in pain. I love this fic and I hope there will be more of it soon.
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Title: OMG, faith rewarded!
Reviewed By: Shiraume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD, UPDATE. Thank you SO much! I'd pretty much given up, but I love this fic so much, I couldn't help re-reading this every once in a while and hoping you'd come back to it one day. This is one of my favorite Naruto fanfictions EVER. I'm a picky reader, but once I love a fanfic, I stick to it like superglue and I never, ever let go. :) This is a beautiful chapter, and wow -- so worth the wait after the cliffhanger last time. I can't say enough about how much I love this story. Your Gaara is half the reason I love Gaara as much as I do! And Naruto -- just... He's incredible; it's like blending his canon sweetness and brash nature with kickass awesome and a primal edge which just doesn't get explored in canon. (Which is a pity -- Nine-Tails could be a really interesting character, especially since the canon implies there's some bleedover between Naruto and Nine-Tails when controls run a bit ragged, yet that part is never explored in depth.) And your Sasuke's growing on me so fast, I'll need a whole new section for him! Thanks again for the beautiful chapter! And keep up the great work. :)
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Reviewed By: adelheidREHT On: July 28, 2010 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Naru/Sasu/Gaara fanfic I've ever read and I am totally addicted to Naruto fanfiction because of this. Do you still plan on updating this story? Or is it in a permanent hiatus? Thanks for writing such an AWESOME fanfic!!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Littlekunai On: April 22, 2010 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to say that your fic has everything, humor, romance, lemons, tension, realism. and it's about one of my most favorite pairings
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