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Reviewed By: nufsinna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is my third time reading this story, and I must tell you how much I adore it. These scenes and characters have stayed with me for months. Gaara's struggle to function in this relationship grips onto my heart and won't let go. His inability to make assumptions based upon physical attraction is frustrating and refreshing at the same time. And happens to fit perfectly with Naruto's own neurosis. Gaara's need for things to be spelled out bluntly and then proved physically cannot help but also dissolve any of Naruto's own insecurites about their 'togetherness'. They are perfect for each other *contented sigh*. And then there is Sasuke. Stirring shit up. I am deeply amused that Gaara, the insane psychopath, has an easier time articulating his feelings for Naruto than the Uchiha. And I cannot wait to see how this tension erupts into something sexy. I am also interested to follow Gaara down whatever twisted logical path will lead him to beleive including Sasuke in their bed is such a great idea. Not that I don't think it's a great idea...I think it's brilliant. Anyway, just wanted you to know how very much I have enjoyed the story thus far. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Title: Best Fanfic Ever!
Reviewed By: Sensei Sunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - I loved the latest chapter and can't wait for the next update! I keep imagining all the fights and trouble Gaara and Sasuke could get into when left to their own devices. Heehee. This is one of the best fanfics I have read, and I love your characterization of Naruto, Gaara and Sasuke. I am excited to see how it all turns out! :-)
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to re-read it once more. And my breath is still on hold for the next update. I do hope that they get things working between all three, I know I would love to see what happens. Until the next update is up, my breath will be on hold. *snickers* Well.. not really but I will be waiting.
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks to you now, my like for GaaraxNaruto is so high that it's detracting from my other favorites (that's what happens when the level of like breaks 100%). I feel that Neji is at a loss. But...oh well. I love this story, and I'll follow it to the end. To the ends of the earth, if I have to. I'll be waiting, anxiously, and patiently, for the next chapter. (And yes, these are the highest ratings I've ever given. I'm just disappointed that the enjoyment factor only allows up to ten. I'd give a 12.)
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 11:41 EST
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update soon this is such a great story~
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: March 05, 2008 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is well deserving of all its praise! I loved every chapter that much more than the last, and as mentioned by... everyone, your Gaara character is amazingly in-line with the anime/manga where most people change them a lot. I loved the cliffhanger you left off with on chapter 12/the last chapter, it made me want to punch something! ^.^ Thats a good thing *cough* as of now *makes note* But I love that you made each chapter long, not many people do that, and I myself can only write two or three pages before i lose interest, so the highest respect is due! Thank you for this amazing story.
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Reviewed By: ednama On: February 05, 2008 16:38 EST
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God, this fic has been recommended to me, and I can see why! this has to be one of the best Gaara/Naruto fic outta here! and I love your Gaara, he's one of the most realistic I've read. ... and the beginning of chapter 4!!! I was crying real tear of laughter!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: biggets anime fan (nli) On: January 26, 2008 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's amazing as usual. Hot, touching, beautiful. I love your stuff, and as this fic is my fav of all time, I have to say I'm not surprised it never dissapoints. Thanks for the awesom fic. Can't wait for more! -bow-
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:15 EST
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BAH! You can't just leave it there! I LOVE this story, I was so excited when I was that you updated it. I wonder how the two are going to behave without their mediator there. Hmm... I guess I'll have to wait and see, hmm? Albeit impatiently waiting. Update again soon, please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 23:33 EST
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I loved this chapter! I loved Sasuke's longing for peace, his inability to walk away from the lovely lovely view ;P and his inability to tell Naruto the truth. well done!
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 22:04 EST
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I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet,but considering how well you've written this and how many times I've read this story, you deserve thanks. First, even though this is a threesome this happens to be some of the best Gaara/Nar ever. I never really thought of them together, partially because I'm not yaoi inclined, but the way you write this makes it seem very true. Not only do they fit, but this is one of the most honest depictions of Gaara in fanfiction. I don't feel like I'm reading about a Gaara like character, but the real thing. Second, I love the time bomb that's been waiting to happen, and I'm happy with the current explosion. Sasuke is every bit the relationship abuser Gaara has made him out to be and I've felt like my issues with the fight at the valley of the end are being expressed through him. I'm glad that Sasuke's been placed in a situation where he's getting burned-when he had to hear them in bed I just thought "burn B*tch burn".I love the tension and strife, and I'm curious about how it will be resolved. Last, thanks for handling Sakura like you did. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to write this out to the end.
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 11:33 EST
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WHERE THE HELL IS MY UPDATE
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just awesome! I loved this chapter so much. The hostilaity between sasuke and Gaara is just so enjoyable. The fact that Naruto has to be the peace keeper is just ironic. It's like how team 7 used to be. Sasuke and Naruto always fighting and Sakura trying to keep the peace. By the way, I love your Sakura. She was there for only a short amount of time but you could see how much she has grown. Very nice touch. She needs this kind of respect in yaoi fics of this nature. I think my favorite part was when Gaara and Sasuke glared at each other when Gaara went to clean up after his riund with Naruto. Afterwards, he went in the room and went another round just to spite Sasuke. I found that so funny!
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Title: Yaaaay!
Reviewed By: biggest anime fan 3 (nli) On: November 22, 2007 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm so happy! Another chapter of my favorite fic in the world. Thank you so much -endless bowing- It's beautiful, emotional, and sexy as always. Althougfh I think it's getting even more enjoyable, if that's possible XO
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Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 11:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh!!! I'm so happy you updated! I absolutely LOVE this story! I can't wait for more!
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