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Title: heartheart
Reviewed By: Crazy Spark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-glee- I love your fic! in this chapter you just gave them a perfect way to figure out Sasuke! I huggle you gleefully. I'm not making much sense because my pain medication is making me incredibly woozy, but you updated! This is the bright spot in the week of horrible pain of wisdom-teeth-removal. Feel accomplished, I now feel somewhat better. I
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. amusingly freakish-ly GOOD!!! +]] all the way with gaara/naruto/sasuke
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Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 13:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
You have an impressive style of writing. The characters are very in character, despite some of the circumstances that they're placed in. And, while these circumstances are probably not what would be found in the manga, they're still plausible, which makes the story interesting to read and wait to find what new twist will come up. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Athene On: April 12, 2007 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're story is awesome, not only the main plot but the sideplay regarding gaara's relationship with his siblings... but, but, but, it's been so long since you've updated... =(
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Title: i
Reviewed By: firekitten On: April 10, 2007 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where this going but i would really like it u updated. oh and the way naruto and gaara's relationship developed totaly makes sense i love that since alot of gaanaru fanfics dont usually give a believable explenation for them being together.
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Title: Nicely done.
Reviewed By: Crazy Spark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. You have developed the relationship very nicely and realistically, and haven't overlooked the little things that make relationships work. I am eagerly awaiting further random plot twists and threesomes, although I'm really wondering how you're going to reconcile Gaara and Sasuke. I also like the way you have matured the characters and made Gaara seem a bit more human. The whole cemetary thing made me smile. When is Sasuke going to stop being an ass? I was also randomly thinking what might happen if Sasuke walked in on one of Gaara's 'episodes' when Naruto wasn't there? That would be interesting to see. I really like this fic, and have put it under my favorites. Your grammar and spelling are good, which is really nice to see in fanfiction. Thanks for writing this fic, and much hopefulness is extended your way in regards to another chapter soon.
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Title: random statement!
Reviewed By: Catsura_blackgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! some spelling errors but over all weee! Random statement:
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Reviewed By: Nine Tailed Fox's lover On: March 25, 2007 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I said a ten, but I meant a million. Your rock. You should try your hand in FMA. You could really do some wonder with a Ed Elric and Envy lemon. YOU ROCK!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Spikerix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent story you have here! Such a way with words, not overly angsty but no fluffy either, just the right amount of each, make the story so hooking you can't wait for more! I love the way your Naruto acts, so heartful and loving; and Gaara is so... IN character, I truly wanna know how Sasuke's gonna fit in all this. Please update soon! Kisses from Argentina ;)
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Title: So amazing!
Reviewed By: biggest anime fan3 (not logged in) On: February 21, 2007 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic. In fact, I love all ur stuff and I'm pretty sure I reviewed before. I could never not express my enjoyment and love of such a great read. Thank u so much for all the effort and talent u put into your fiction.
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Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 15:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Totally Freakin' tight! Please be more... descriptively seductive next time! Perhaps a strange love triangle occurence. Let me know if that's possible.. OK? Keep writin' em up homie. Thanx
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 11:55 EST
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I've really enjoyed this story so far, though now that Sasuke's back that'll most likly changed. Not like what I think matters or anything, but I don't like the idea of Sasuke getting involved in what Gaara and Naruto have made. Personally I think Gaara would just kill him, and dispite Sasuke's ego I think Gaara could do it and do it easily. Your characterization of Gaara has been awesome thus far.
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The Angst begins. I really looking forward to what happens next. I just wish that Naruto and Gaara can show up his happy relationship to Sasuke and then throw it in his face. I just love GaaraXNaruto so much. I do like this threesome though. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 21:19 EST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter hurry with your next update please and thank you!
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Title: YA!
Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very well written chapter. I'm so gald you updated because I'd been looking forward to this update for a while. I was ver UNdisappointed. Very fun to read and I loved the emotion. I had a feeling Gaara would do what to did. If you can't stop 'em join 'em. HeeHee.
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