| "Full Metal Panic! Novelization" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: scribblemonster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all my little sister wrote this (who is only twelve by the way) She didn't mean any harm. She is sorry if she offended anyone and is now off crying somewhere. She just thought it would be something fun to write. Please do not leave anymore cruel messages.She no longer wishes to write anymore of it so please don't be harsh to her! comments like these really hurt her feelings. Thank you
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Reviewed By: EasternCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sonny you beter lay off with the entire story. Full Metal Panic! IS a novel in its most original version to begin with. It was vritten by Syouji Gatoh and Retsu Tateo. I give you a little tip, before you go trying to play big guy try to look around a little. Aside from this you can hardly call what you just made a novell. It has more mistakes than most amateurs can call decent. I have to agree with the previous review this is nothing, but a version in which you write down what you saw in the manga. You can hardly call plagarizing and art!
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Reviewed By: Bab-il Ghost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't fairly give ratings for style and spelling and if there was a way to give a zero for creativity, I would. This is just the text of the first chapter of the translated manga cut and pasted. There was no real work or thought here. If you're going to rewrite the story, put some real effort into it and don't try to pass off copyright violations as your own material.
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