| "Female Naruto My Way:M rated version" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: hinata-fan On: November 15, 2006 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh awesome i like this one much better:P u should get hinata to do somefingering or w/e :P lol but ya, like the story u tried my way:) hope u keep it like that it was much ezer to read:P, but i'll still read if u dont:P im just an absest fan i have no other pointers:P
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter! I can't wait to see the next one on FF.net and then read the full version here!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 04:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Most excellent chapter! I enjoy seeing Naru and Hinata being so close and I can't wait until they can be affectionate in public!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story, I enjoyed it alot! I hope to see more of it and see how Naruto and Hinata's relationship developes over time!
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