| "100MIL TORTURE" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunks_Wifie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I haven't read the story and just by the reviews I can tell I don't want to.THX...for nothing of course but wasted browsing time.
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Title: Story
Reviewed By: Mika_san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 11:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
No offense, hun, but your summary's better (and possibly longer) then your story. I suggest that a. You learn how to write a fanfiction before you fail miserably at trying. b.Learn to stop using caps lock. and c. To learn plain english. If you revise your story, people might actually like it!
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Title: Hmph.
Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
To all of the reviewers: All of these reviews are just as pathetic as you say this fan fiction is. If you really do get that angry over ONE fan fiction, to the point that your sentences are nearly incoherent, I suggest that you never make another review again. ...As for the fan fiction: Sorry, hun, but this story lacks practically everything. Honestly, I didn't read much more than the first few lines; simply because I couldn't. I also suggest to you that you switch off the Caps Lock, and maybe occasionally look up from the keyboard. I know that some people have a hard time typing, but in this case that really isn't a valid excuse. I'm not sure how old you are (I'm guessing around thirteen or fourteen), but you ought to pay attention to your English/Language teacher. Heck, you might even learn something. You are welcome to post stories of any kind, but apparently you aren't mature enough to write stories about 'hentai'. If you're underage (which I'm assuming you are), your guardians probably wouldn't be too happy if they knew you were writing this, so just quit while you're ahead, buddy. =)
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Title: Fuck it
Reviewed By: WinDex-Martini [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fuck it.My review was cut off twice. Check you e-mail.
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Title: My last review was cut off
Reviewed By: WinDex-Martini [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:17 CDT
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Wow.. Just.. Wow. I'm going to give you some CONSTUCTIVE critism. After all those flames I doubt you'll read this but.. what the hell.First thing's first, what are all those slymboles at the top? are you trying to decorate? If so, please don't. Some authors put Astriks (*
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Title: wow..
Reviewed By: WinDex-Martini [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. Just.. Wow. I'm going to give you some CONSTUCTIVE critism. After all those flames I doubt you'll read this but.. what the hell.First thing's first, what are all those slymboles at the top? are you trying to decorate? If so, please don't. Some authors put Astriks (*
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Title: Piece of crap story
Reviewed By: AngelPrincess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL IS THIS SUPPOSED TO BE!!!!!!!!I normally dont flame writers, but with you i'll make an exception. THIS STORY IS A PIECE OF CRAP! I WOULDN'T EVEN CALL IT A STORY!
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Reviewed By: GreyFox23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm...and im supposed to read this? I dont normally flame people but its downright crap. Come up wit something better.
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Title: Don't bother reading it
Reviewed By: TrueCharizard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't and I guessed it was crap I enjoyed poking fun at it
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Reviewed By: bulletbill99 On: October 30, 2003 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
AT LEAST GIVE THIS STORY A BETTER PLOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morpheus0101010101 On: October 21, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT NATIONALITY ARE YOU!!!!! I DON'T USUALLY FLAME PEOPLE LIKE THIS BUT YOUR WRITING LOOKS LIKE FREAKIN' RUSSIAN!!!!! I MEAN, I COULD WRITE BETTER STUFF THAN THIS!!!!! JUST GIVE ME ONE WEEK AND I COULD HAVE A GREAT FIC IN NO TIME AT ALL!!!!!
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
1 word can describe this "Crap"
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Title: Tyler Durden2003
Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of writing complete nonesense is in fact rather original but unfortunatly it also means everything else about the story is unbearable.
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Reviewed By: SSJ Ryoko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 15:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
they waz right....u should stop writing.....oh well...not everything can be Sapphire Eyes!!!!
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Reviewed By: YamiBakuras-gurl122 On: August 23, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most WORST thing that i have ever read!!!!! MY 5 YEAR OLD NEPHEW CAN WRITE BETTER THAN U!!!!!!!! I HOPE THAT U DON'T CONTINUE ON WITH THIS PIECE OF CRAP U CALL A STORY!!!! |
Reviewed By: YamiBakuras-gurl122 On: August 23, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most WORST thing that i have ever read!!!!! MY 5 YEAR OLD NEPHEW CAN WRITE BETTER THAN U!!!!!!!! I HOPE THAT U DON'T CONTINUE ON WITH THIS PIECE OF CRAP U CALL A STORY!!!!sUCH A BAKA!!!! |
Reviewed By: Not givin it On: July 24, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh i just lookd at it and i thought.... What the fuck is this..... and uh i dont like flaming people but this is an excption..........................God i suck at spelling............Ah well who cares any way.......i gave the creative points all the way up cause you got OnE ScReWeD Up MiNd so sorry for the flame Causte its gonna Be HoT when you go to..............you know where. |
Reviewed By: Jita [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was the worst thing I ever read, doesn't even desirve the name of fanfiction. I'd shoot myself if I were you, go hide or smtg. You wrote such a piece of crap. |
Reviewed By: strange On: June 26, 2003 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU USE MS WORD FORMATTING ON THE WEB ALL I GOT TO SAY TO YOU FOR THAT IS BAKA. THE PLOT WAS NON-EXISTENT. |
Reviewed By: ????? On: June 17, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU STINK |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i guess is not the best thing, but... |
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