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"Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Title: more please...
Reviewed By: Diabolik Affinity [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2007 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is one of the better stories that I've read on this site. I'm not sure that's how Johnny would really think to himself, though. I thought his thoughts might be a little more incoherent and confusing. Still, very good. And I like how you brought Sickness into the picture. I like that mini-series too, maybe you should have Squee come back too! keep writing so I can keep reading.
 Title: Oooh
Reviewed By: Snow_Bunnie [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2006 23:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like. I like. I've always wanted to read a fan fic in the 1st person of Nny. So this is cool. It's kind of hard to read, so I'd add extra spaces between the paragraphs. But I'm excited to read more. *Adds to favorites*
 Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 11, 2006 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i've read this on ff.net and i'm really interested. update soon?
 Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2006 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I've heard of having a few loose screws... but that just takes it to a whole new level... the chapters are really really short... you should make them longer... and please continue...

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