| "Ruby Hills" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: .CHEESE. On: October 15, 2007 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i don't know if you're still writing on this or not, but i really think you should. I really enjoy it, and happened to find it by chance. When i first started reading it i was hooked and didn't stop until i read all the chapters you had posted. Now i check it every day for more. So, if you're writing on it still you should def. add more soon! ;D Thanks, .CHEESE.
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Reviewed By: keymaster16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, description is a little weak but you have some very interesting characters (Dayne), you may want to work on tension a little bit, (like that breakin at the house?) keep writing, i'd like to see more
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Reviewed By: Pacifica2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
creative i like it hope you can update soon XP
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Reviewed By: vampier lover On: May 29, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asum i don't think eney one coold match that so will i love the black house i fell the same way you discrbd her to i can't wait tell you update
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Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great fic, i want to know what happens next. please update.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good fic!! u should still keep going wit it..
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Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: January 01, 2007 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well what r u waiting for? UPDATE! this story is freakin awsome!!!!
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