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| "10 things I hate about Eva" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Very nice intro
Reviewed By: ICBM On: December 31, 2006 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice; I liked it. Please say there will be more
| Reviewed By: Angelic girl On: December 29, 2006 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is a good opener, the fact that you decided to begin your story with the ending gives it an interesting twist. I Also liked the whole concept of mixing 10 things I like about you with the cast of Evangelion; Asuka as Katerina is a dead on characterization, and Shinji being something different than the whiny wuss we all know and love is refreshing. You have a nice writing style, but I feel you need to pay more attention to some of the spelling mistakes as well as grammar and syntax of the story, since some of the paragraphs seem to be rushed together. All in all it's a nice story, I'll definitely be waiting for the next update.
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