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"Seitan Taisen Through his eyes." Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: s.t.
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2007 01:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like introspective pieces in general. your piece was short, a bit too short for an introspective piece. I wasnt sure what you wanted s.t. to feel, or to be? did you want him to recognize sanzo? the others... or allow him the range? what do you think s.t. is? i dont get a clear picture of what you feel about him. it's a good start, but - for me, i want you to flesh it out a bit. make me understand your idea of s.t. i have my own ideas about the sage, but recognize that these may not be yours too ... so let me more of what your ideas are...

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