Reviewed By: Drake Pegasus On: January 22, 2007 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good first chapter; the descriptions are handled really well, and, though some of the details are from further than I've got in the game, it doesn't really spoil too much for the casual readers either, so far. Keeping the character and partner's identity/gender ambiguous seems to have worked out. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already! Til next chapter, cya!
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