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Title: Me again!
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's your favorite reviewer JELLO!!! lol I reread the whole story, and still loved it just as much, and it was kinda like reading it for the first time because I had forgotten some stuff, but again it was truly amazing!
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Reviewed By: elizabeth/twisted-loca On: June 02, 2008 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the best!this is by far the best fan-fic i ever read!!! i hope you have many other story's that had the suspension such as this one. again thanks for the wonderful read!! hope to read more of your stories in the near future, Chelsea Lugo
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Reviewed By: elizabeth/twisted-loca On: June 02, 2008 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the best!this is by far the best fan-fic i ever read!!! i hope you have many other story's that had the suspension such as this one. again thanks for the wonderful read!! hope to read more of your stories in the near future, Chelsea Lugo
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Reviewed By: Pink Fuzzy Socks... one good thing is I won't have to keep writing this out anymore On: October 24, 2007 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... It's over. I feel so lost, so confused, so... hey you've got another story. Nevermind then. No, but really. This is upsetting. Not only was this an amazing story, but it was the only one I could ever count on to be updated. I have to say you really captured the whole 'high on meds' thing Kagome had going on there. Funny people those overly medicated ones are. I had a friend once who woke up from surgery laughing about how she felt like a marshmellow. Really weird. Anyway, I'll try to stay on topic. No promises. The sequel should definitly be interesting. I just hope you don't pull a 'Soul Exchange', 'Life Exchange'. By that I mean killing of the main characters in the sequel. Both of those were written by Rozefire by the way, you probably know that already, the ending made me cry (who am I kidding that one had me in tears from the beginning). Damnnation I've started digressing again. I'm gonna rap this up before it gets out of hand. Nice chapter, great story, can't wait to see the sequel. Wow, that was my entire review in one line. Well, I'll be waiting for the sequel... right here... not moving... waiting... oh god! Ignore the last bit. Love the story! Later
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Title: Jello
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 16:25 CDT
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Hey IM BACK!!!! Sorry for not reviewing after you posted updates and now look this awesome story has come to a close.. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!!! Sorry I wasn't here to cheer you on as the story went on! I was in the hospital for like a month I got a bad case of pneumonia..that sucked... but im still alive and kicking! Awesome story!
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 16:14 CDT
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that was.....just....wow.i want to ask you if you can make a sequel like where they are a couple of years later.it could just be a one-shot for all i care just something so i know what happenes a couple of years later.please and thank-you.until next time.... -inuyashacrazy101
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 15:58 CDT
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I FEEL ACOMPLISHED IN GIVING YOU YOUR 200th REVIEW ON THIS STORY!!!
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Title: So I guess this is it
Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 15:57 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!! This is soooo superspectacular... I LOVED THIS ENDING!!! And I don't even like Kikyo that much, so that means something when I'm brought to tears over her. YAY KOGA!!! YAY SESHOMARU!! YAY SANGO AND AYAME AND YURA!!! YAY SHIPPO(soooo Forrest gump...)!!! Oh migod just wow... *sniffles* I can't believe this is really it.. wow... *blows nose*okay you probably didn't need to picture that... *laughs*. You are the best author ever you know that? I wuv you!!! Congrads!!! It feels so weird not writing Suggestions for the mp3... I'm gonna do it anyway!! Okay um... *racks brain* um... Over You by Chris Daughtry and Things I'll never say by Avril Lavigne and Revolution by the Beatles and Ole Ole by the Bouncing Souls. Amazing story, and again congrads! AN hopefully there will be a sequel so I can say Update soon! ~#1 fan da 2nd
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE COOLEST STORY EVER!!! THATS SAD KIKYO DIED...INUYASHA AND KAGOME GOT BACK TOGETHER,YAY!!! HA HA HA SHIPPO GOT SHOT IN THE ARSE LOL!!!! THAT WAS A GREAT STORY I LOVED IT!!!
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 14:18 CDT
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Yay! they all lived...except kikyou. that was kinda sad. in other stories i'm happy that she dies, but this was sad. what ever happend to Sango? i don't want to believe that she was dead after those gunshot wounds. such a great story. can't wait until you write the sequel
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 12:41 CDT
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im literally crying this was my favorite story :') but then again i really really loved it did u know this was my first story i read here on mediaminer and i really loved it!!! i was on the brink of tears when kikyou died she was an really good character in the story i loved how many dangerous turns was here and all the blood boiling acts and all the love and fighting it was the best story i ever read and i loved it so much i stuck to it till the end but now its over and i have only a few good stories left and none will have what urs have. keep up the awesome work and i hope to see more stories from u soon :'(...:') .....^-^...:'(
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Reviewed By: Shawna On: September 21, 2007 20:30 CDT
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O...M...F...G...I LUVD IT!!!!!i had a little trouble focusing cause i was tired but i got it in good enogh.plese get the epiloge in asap.until next time... -inuyashacrazy101
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Title: it me! nya!
Reviewed By: sakura-chan101 On: September 20, 2007 17:11 CDT
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hey sakura-chan here! just lettin u no im changing my name so its me Inuyashalover41000031AKArad coco. i loved cahp 33! it was so good! nya! gotogo1 l8er sakura-chan! nya!
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Reviewed By: Cappuccino Babe On: September 17, 2007 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is a freaking good fanfic...i was glued to it forever!! you seriously have to finish it soon, or i will die from the suspense!!
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Reviewed By: Pink fuzzy socks.. okay I think you get the idea On: September 17, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, damn. That was a very bam bam bam chapter if you know what I mean. Action from beginning to end, and I gotta admit I was really worried about this chapter. Most fanfiction authors can'y write action scenes, even a lot of real authors, but I was dissapointed you really came through for this chapter, it turned out brillantly. I'm really worried for the epilouge though I'm afraid to see who you might have killed off. I'm jus hopping you don't pull a shakespsear and kill off everybody (except for the -tio character, they always get to live for some reason, huratio, maqutio, I think I spelled that worng-io, sorry, I'm tired). Anyway, I'm really hopping that Kagome and Inuyasha get back together in the epilouge, if Kagome survives of course. I gotta say the last chapter would be a little odd if Kagome died, seeing as it's a first person narative from her perspective, but hey the anime did it... that was a really weird episode (where Kagome did the introduction for the episode where Kanna was stealing the villigers souls, greatest line ever "Kanna stole all the villigers souls, as well as my own!") *sigh*, but I digress. An excellent chapter if I do say so. I hope my review didn't confuse you too much. It's a monday after school and all I have to look forward to is stirfry *shudders* Dammit. But, my main point is that it was an amazing chapter, you really captured the action scenes to perfection. I can't wait to see the epilouge! Till then, later!
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