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Title: I'm so Sorry!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: May 18, 2009 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry. I've just had a big event happen in my life and i haven't had time on the computer for months and months. I feel bad for at least not saying where or what happened to me. But i really think you should continue writing and i'll try harder to get on the computer.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: August 12, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you've haven't updated in awhile i'm missing this story where are you if it sounds like i'm pressureing you only if just say.I'm trying to get my friend to read this story but she hasn't watched the series so now i'm trying to get her to watch the series my other friends have watched the series but there not into fanfiction.I don't have alot of friends out there sorry but i'm determined not to give up. please update thanks
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Title: great
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: June 30, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay a other chapter the story is getting better as it moves along when Kaname shot that guy it was a tense moment that she finally killed a man i felt sympathy toward her imagean you have killed a man what would go thourgh your head? good Question.please update thanks
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Title: brillent
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: May 11, 2007 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it again a work of genius i story line is great as always the whole thing with Kanames dad freaking out because she had a boyfriend that was great it kind of reminds me of my dad only a little. im really confused of what age is kanames sister maybe i wasnt paying attention and i maent have to read over a chapter or two .please write more its getting good.
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Title: please
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: April 25, 2007 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write other chapter.sorry i have to give you a nine for spelling and grammer because there was some mistakes in spelling but i only found two or three thats not bad i'm just pointing it out cause i think you should know.cool a promise ring that was so sweet i'm still waiting for my ideal man to give me a promise ring(sigh)and the fan is it going to have some importants in the future chapters ( hint hint )please write more chapys please ( puppy eyes)
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Title: welcome
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: April 25, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
welcome for chapter three ... whatever i did??i'm going to introduce this story your story to my friends next time they come over.great chapter the nose bleed was so funny you made my jaw hurt from laughing. great chapter i have faith in you.keep it up
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: April 05, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cool so COOL i love it you wrote more that is so cool what a twist i really didn't know Kaname had a dad is that in the anime? lovely i like your writering ok the whole thing about the angey mob and souske running after the guy was unnesary(sp) you could have just ended at souske pointing the gun at the boy then the cops came then the park but who i talking your the author(sorry) please update
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: March 26, 2007 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet ,i loved it, i'm hooked please write more chapters.
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