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"Feet First into Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: A decent begining...
Reviewed By: Durandal [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2007 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is, overall, a pretty good fanfiction. There are some minor story flow issues, but you seem to have a good grip on the feel of the Halo universe. You've got plenty of action, but a little more focus on character diversity and development would greatly help out you style and enjoyment scores. I encourage you to continue working on this. It's a fine start.

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