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"A lesson to Learn" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Title: Hot
Reviewed By: ComeNGetIt  On: June 05, 2013 22:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was amazingly hot. Now I'm curious. If Gohan experienced the same urges, I wonder how it would have been with him. It would be amazing to read a threesome between Gohan/ChiChi/Goku, with a lovely side dish of Videl. But Videl is a main course all in herself, isn't she?
 Reviewed By: master yoshi  On: February 24, 2011 17:43 EST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
pan would have been better off screwing mr satan instead of gohan since satan is her real dad. you can write one with pan and videl and satan in a 3some!
 Reviewed By: bbhbh  On: January 20, 2008 08:55 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
The reason you even got 1 out of 10, you son-of-a-bitch is because they don't give you the option to put zero or MINUS numbers as a rating. This is the sickest, most disgusting, depraved shit I have ever had it be my extreme misfortune to read!!! YOU ARE CRAZY!!!! Where do you stop, you rim-job!!?? Chichi, pan, and all those other fucking whores! There's no limit, you motherfucker!!! You're probably some old fucking pervert who couldn't get a girl to save his life (or a guy) and that's why you resort to such vulgar drivel!!! Do you honestly think that THIS appeals to 'Gohan fans'!!!!????!! Only ass-fucking, shit heads like yourself adhere to this kind of shit. You are sick and I hope you die a most painful death, Lewis!!!!(fucking ridiculous name by the way) EAT SHIT,FUCKER!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: JTS  On: December 02, 2007 11:23 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very entertaining, I like how they end up together, that was HOT!!! Keep up work like this! Like you interpretation of saiyan stand on Taboos i.e. Incest not a crime. Keep stuff like this coming!
 Title: 2 thoughts
Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 27, 2007 17:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
great description in ta story i dont what the family was thinking well i can forgive gohan since he has saiyin instincts he cant control sometimes but still videl and pan wwoooooooaaaaahhh i didnt expect them to say or do things like that but all endevor great job
 Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2007 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another well written fanfic. I bit unusual but oh well. Oh and a spelling error where it should have been 'her' your wrote 'hermione' lol, cracked me up...

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