| "The Tide of Ruin and Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: Devour my...
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: April 19, 2010 13:12 CDT
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Since the Race of Chaos is a race, I think it would be funny if GunEagle told Epyon "Devour my dust," or at least tell him "Devour my shorts!"
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Reviewed By: Cybertot On: February 25, 2010 21:29 CST
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Woo, this is getting heavy! Some many different plots... What next, I wonder!?
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Title: Scorponok?
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 23, 2010 22:43 CST
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Now that I re-read this, I noticed something...was the part about the first attack of the Jörmungandr a play on what happened with Scorponok from the first Transformers movie? If so...cool! He was my favorite transformer in that movie. PS. How does Scourge compare with the Sacred Beast Phoenix? Speaking of Scourge, will Deathscythe order Tatari to capture Scourge, too?
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Title: grammer error
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 23, 2010 22:14 CST
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"...warm in there large blankets sleeping..." should be "...warm in their large blankets sleeping..."
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Reviewed By: ***** On: February 22, 2010 17:25 CST
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Nice chapter! I can't wait for the next one! And I love Crystal's new ability! Keep this up!
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Shining G. On: February 20, 2010 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappy!! Very intertaning (LOL, loved Baku and Crystal's conversasion when Baku was trying to talk to Captain!)(PS also loved the part with Zapper getting his butt set on fire!) I feel so bad for the Jörmungandr, poor thing. Anyway can't wait for the next chappy! (BTW I've been stalking MM.org waiting for this. ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 20, 2010 13:39 CST
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Yeah, I kinda knew that came form Revenge of the Fallen. Anyway...Thank you! Love your work!
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 12:16 CST
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Dang, lots of questions. I'll go ahead and answer them here though; I took Deathscythe merging with the Steel Dragon out because the chapter was long enough as it was, so it'll probably be put in another chapter (Or he may not merge with it at all, since the Steel Dragon's still ticked at him from last time). Genkimaru did not teleport because they're too far away from the Gundamusai. I figured the kid's on an empty stomach and usually in the show he can only teleport short distances. Kiboamaru is no longer in Lacroa, he's back in Ark since this takes place about a year after SDGF season 2, so he should be done learning about monarchy in Lacroa. The triplets are supposed to be hiding with the other Lacroa residents, but I will make note of that when I edit past chapters of TToRaD after editting TToHaF. The dialogue between Epyon and GunEagle was just to poke fun at Transformers Revenge of the Fallen when Optimus yells, 'Give me your face!!', so it's not meant to be serious. XP And as far as the old GG/Crim idea, the old TToHaF was typed up before that fic came out. That, and I never go by what happens in other people's fanfics since mine are separate adventures. The only other fanfic I go by is 'Kibou Hoshi' since Erisu and I usually team up on our fanfic ideas. I hope these answer your questions! Happy to know that some people are curious! ;)
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Title: Many, many questions and an edit suggestion
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 20, 2010 11:36 CST
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Why didn't Deathscythe bond with the Steel Dragon when Tatari captured it? If Genkimaru's so hungry, why doesn't he teleport back to the Gundamusai? When SD Gundam Force ended, Kibaomaru decided to stay in Lacroa. Is he still there? Speaking of Lacroa residents, where are the triplets? Thinking back to chapter 10 when Epyon was attacking GunEagle, I think his first dialogues would have been better if they were switched: "Now I will devour you," and then "Give me your soul!" (in regards to my earlier comment) PS. When I read the new chapter, the part at the top said "Visits: 1." Does that mean I was the first to read it? PSS. Crimson and Grappler Gouf? Doesn't Grappler Gouf already have Killer Kath from that SD Gundam beauty pageant fic? Then again, I guess that doesn't count since that fic involved Bakunetsumaru having two sisters.
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Title: Crimson/Dom origin?
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 01, 2010 21:24 CST
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I gotta know, what made you decide to pair up Crimson and Destroyer Dom? Of all the characters available, why Destroyer Dom? Not that I'm complaining, of course, Destroyer Dom is my favorite. PS. I can see that you acknowledged my edit about the audio receptors. Well done!
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: February 01, 2010 14:05 CST
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A new chapter after 342 days (or as Captain would put it, twenty-nine million, five-hundred forty-eight thousand, eight-hundred seconds)! Better yet, the next chapter is gonna be sooner than that! I only have one problem: It was an awesome line, but I can't imagine Epyon saying "Give me your face!" Maybe you should change 'face' to 'soul'.
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Reviewed By: ????? On: January 31, 2010 14:16 CST
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yay! New update! Can't wait for the eleventh chapter!
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Title: *bows* Oh Great One...
Reviewed By: Shining G. On: January 31, 2010 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! Great chapter, this had me on the edge of my seat. I resently read this a few weeks ago and have been waiting for this. Can't wait for cahppy 11.
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Title: Idea and an edit
Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: July 17, 2009 23:39 CDT
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I have a brilliant suggestion. Let's say that Grappler Gouf, after being imprisioned twice in "The Tide of Hopes and Fears" (or in "Kibou Hoshi" [If he does get imprisioned]), decided to plan ahead for if he ever gets imprisioned in a jail cell again. The result is that he when he presses a button concealed on his body, a saw blade protrudes out of one of the spikes in his shoulder armor. After running the blade against the bars of the cell long enough, he can cut though it and escape! As for the edit, you keep saying that the Gundam/robot characters have "hearing sensors". They are called Audio Receptors. PS. I CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE SUSPENSE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ***** On: April 27, 2009 17:31 CDT
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I just re-read chapter nine, and I'm curious as to what that entity mentioned is. Also, please try to get Chapter 10 done! The suspense is killing me!
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