| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 01:54 CDT
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Nice chapter. You've had me on pins and needles, wondering what Kagome's decision will be. I don't know when the last time was that I reviewed this fic, but I want to tell you that I loved the end of the battle scene, especially where Inuyasha says something to the effect, "One exit, coming up." That was great. And then there was the 'Ew' attitude from Inuyasha when Sesshoumaru and Kagome were all goo-goo at each other in the ring. All of your original characters are wonderfully portrayed. You make them real. I love this story. It's original, angsty, suspenseful and exciting. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: barelybreathing On: June 19, 2008 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE THIS FIC IT IS IN ITS OWN LEAGUE, I HAVE NEVER READ ANOTHER FIC LIKE IT. aND I WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WOULD UPDATE SOON. THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:16 CDT
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Another great chapter!!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 22:54 CDT
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I think you did a rathe rgood job with this one! I'm eager to see how it plays out. Sesshoumaru is so great in your story... you manage to make him so... him, and yet, he's different with Kagome. You've done an awesome job. I know what you mean about getting back to the story... I've been horrible with my own updates. So don't worry - we'll still be here. ^_^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 06:33 CDT
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aww...how sweet. well, when it comes to fanfics and "obvious" endings, i try not to take anything for granted. there was one fic i was reading that was a x-over and absolutely everything went wrong with kagome. if you thought that she was going to make it...she didn't. if you thought that she was going to avoid being drugged...she didn't. so i've learned that anything can happen in a fanfic, despite all my wishes. :D FL
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Reviewed By: RediHebi On: May 14, 2008 10:57 CDT
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Awsome as always pleeeeassssssssssseeeee update soon!!! i love this story your an incredible writer!!!
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Reviewed By: omgitsmomo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 00:23 CDT
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I love this chapter! updatee, I can't wait to read more. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: April 02, 2008 21:19 CDT
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Bravo! I don't care how long it takes you, this piece is brilliant. It is one of the most creative and astonishing stories i have read. Completely ecstatic for the next chapter. Till then!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 17:42 CDT
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indeed, no complaints over it being long. can't imagine it any other way now.:) brightens my day to see the "vying for dominance" is updated in my mailbox.
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Reviewed By: kammi On: April 02, 2008 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha ok that bit about this originally being a one-shot now makes the beginning make a lot of sense. at first i was really confused that it was purely sex but i'm still really glad that you developed it into a story--only you could have done that. great job and keep up the good work; it is much appreciated :]
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 17:38 CDT
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A steamy chapter, indeed. ^_^ I, too, am sad that this is going to be ending soon, but I'm sure you want it done, already. I've felt that way about my stories as well... Good luck getting this next scene out - I wonder what will happen?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... yea...
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools* A really hot chapter! This is what I would call a typical Shadow-chapter. :) Steaming hot lemons with a good story to it. A true pleasure to read! I'm sad this story is coming to an end, but I'm also happy you're gonna continue on Sins of the Father. I think I'm gonna go read that one next.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: April 02, 2008 00:19 CDT
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Nah the title never ending story is already taken and not even a quarter as good and captivating as this is. Loved the update there are a few small errors just misplaced words nothing to big just like 2 sentences i think i caught where something was not right ya know one of the sentences u have to read like 3 times and still can't get it anyways loving the update and really dreading the end of the story just because it's so addictive and enjoyable it seems like it's starting to wrap up which is great and all but it's always sad to see a wonderful story end
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, a really beautiful chapter! I really like how you brought to attention that Kagome is no dog, and doesn't like the taste of blood. That would have been creepy and so not-Kagome if you had her go all excited over tasting the blood. And it was so cute how you compared him to Buyo bringing a dead bird to share with his Kagome. XD Can't wait for the next chapter, I think I sense the sweet smell of a lemon approaching.... ;)
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