| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Keep more chapters coming!!!
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Reviewed By: placidsmile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic. thanks for updating promptly. i did a straight shot one day of your fan fic, and couldn;t stop reading after that.
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Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 00:01 CDT
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lol and here is me thinking as i read this chapter. dame that is a long kiss. they must really be going at it. lol
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:25 CDT
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You handled the time overlap beautifully. I am in awe of your story. (bow)
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Reviewed By: Moonlit_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 13:39 CDT
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OMG!! Not a cliff hanger at the most exciting part!! I've GOT to know what happens next! (and what mama fluffy thinks about all this, lol) Luv all ur stories and this is no different! Can't wait 4 the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 12:37 CDT
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GAH! :: runs around like a chicken with her head cut off :: You left it at a cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! I just have to read more! GAH!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yet another cliffy. But as usual, it was a good place to end the chapter, so I don't get too upset. :) Now I just have to wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be so exciting! It's so cool that Sesshoumaru finally acknowledged Inuyasha as his brother. It couldn't have come at a better time! Kuro is gonna get his ass handed to him on a plate. No one insults Sesshoumaru like that and gets away with it. *gets bloodthirsty* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 08:23 CDT
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Masterful, absolutely masterful. What a wonderful way to reveal Inuyasha's heritage. I can not wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heck-fire! I thought I'd piss when Sesshoumaru said "draw"! Damn, this is a very well written chapter!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 07:07 CDT
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great. i loved this chapter. *waiting for more* FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: March 11, 2008 06:11 CDT
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Action time! Aahhahaah they all will feel the wrath of the inu brothers!! ahaha
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Title: MY HEART D:
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story gets my heart all thumping. Like when you watch "300" or the last LOTR movie when its all an epic battle scene and you're mind is all "HOMFG WHAT THE HELL OMG ATTAAAACCCKKK FIIIIIIGHHHHTTTTT UUGHHH" If that makes any sense....I get really pumped up when dramatic things like what happened in this chapter happens. You're soooo-oooo-ooo good at description. D:< I envy it. I'm waiting breathlessly for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whee!!!!!!!! dies!!!!! wonderful!!!! yea... kiss did seem long If you forgot that it was a "Layered" chapter.....
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 00:30 CDT
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That was a pretty fast update not that I'm complaining mind you. I'm as excited as can be. It was a fantastic chapter and Inuyasha is finally recognized. Go Yasha! It's kinda funny that note at the bottom of the chapter thinking of this being one heck of a long kiss is what I thought too as I was reading it. I was kinda wowwed by the thought of it, I mean they must have iron lungs or something XD Anyway I loved this chapter. You rock... despite your evil cliff hangers.
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 23:13 CDT
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Oh. My. GOD. I swear, your story is one of THE BEST I have read in a long, long time. UPDATE?! PLEASE?! I'm twitching where I stand in excitement for what is to come :D
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