| "In love with the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Oops Spelling On Other
Reviewed By: KaraKochiOokami On: April 01, 2008 00:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol Im One To Talk About Spelling :3
| Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: KaraKochiOokami On: April 01, 2008 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Stary Is Awesome! A Few Spelling Problems But Other Than That :)
| Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Alex Fisher On: February 27, 2008 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this story was amazing!!! I can not wait till you update this fic!!! I actually have only been on this site once but i was scrolling through the stories and came across yours and i kid you not... I was so glad that i took the time out to read this!!! Amazingly written. I wonder if Anzu is going to accept that fact that he likes her. I mean she is not one to be happy with all the things that Yami has done. But what shocked me the most is the fact that Anzu dumped Yami!!!! Who in their right mind would dump Yami over jealousy!!!! Yami is F'in hot. I SO WOULD NOT TRADE HIM FOR THE WORLD IF HE WAS MY BOYFRIEND!!!!
| Title: Difference
Reviewed By: AngelOfTime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said, Dutch, right? Does that mean you grew up in the Netherlands? That would mean that you basically learned the English language in school. That would be quite helpful to know, since I can judge far better in that way. If so the mistakes made here are so few, (very little compared to some English stories out there and their main language is English), that they do not bother me in the least. Your character is very interesting as well, though I still do not know how she looks like. The short Introduction doesn't matter, it is actually the right thing to do at the start ^.^, so don't worry a lot, your story has a huge amount of potential and differs from others.
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