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| "Negima: Ninja Magi Sensei" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: adnan On: December 14, 2012 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i have read this about a year a ago i was thrilled to learn that in some way negi and kaede are together even if its fanfic but i patience has been off the roof i have been ocupied with a lot of stuff but i always check and start saying to my self if this guy has wrote the new chapter and i have been always dissapointed i realize you have your own life but stoping at the best point of the story and wait for soo long to write it is a real bitch so i hope that you read this review and to write the chapter if you do thank you very much | Title: proffessional lurker
Reviewed By: mattde On: February 01, 2009 02:54 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic, love the main pairing and the inclusion of Heathcliff. Only part I disagree with is the treatment of Ayaka, but that is a small thing. Love how you are working some of the more minor characters (Misora, Yuna, Cocone and Takane) into the story. Will you bring Mei in as well?
| Reviewed By: proclaimer On: June 28, 2008 04:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL MEASUREMENTS ARE IN CENTIMETERS!!! 1. Chizuru Naba-94 2. Kaede Nagase-89 3. Mana Tatsumiya-88.9 (Eh!?!) 4. Kazumi Asakura-88 5. Haruna Saotome-87 6&7. Akira Okochi & Satsuki Yotsuba-86 8. Ayaka Yukihiro-85 I had a huge thing about making your story better but its all lost. I would like to learn more about Kaede's heritage is she a japanese american or full japanese it would help. I would also like to see more character development in her own thought process right now its pretty standard but an evolution would greatly enhance her depth. I feel like you story is moving far faster then it was originally planned and it feels like only a week has passed since everything happened but in the Manga to the point you were at it was already the fall semester. Also note that in Japaneses culture their schools start in February not in September. Also include major holidays and exclude american ones, since this is based in Japan they do not celebrate christmas, thanks giving or anything like that. It helps with localization. Also there is a shorter break for summer which is only about 40 some days quite a bit smaller by american standards. Also i would like to see some secondary characters to develop more also Asuna for one. Spelling errors are not rampant but some touch ups could be made and the amount of spelling mistakes are so few that it takes little away from the story. I enjoy this story quite a bit and thats why i am giving you information on the happenings because i feel like this story can grow much better then it is now and its room to grow is as good as the manga is and it can literally have no idea in long run if done right.
| Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 08:32 EDT
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great to see another chapter, and hay at least you have written your chapter, with the story i'm writing i haven't got passed the first chapter and i've been working on it for over three months(i've only written 2200 words) great to see another chapter and can't wait for the next, zam
| Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 01:00 EST
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i found this to be a very enjoyable story, and i have to agree that the love potion incident is one of my favorite bits as well + our little perverted furry friend, hope you keep on writing
| Title: Very Nice
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I like it. Of course, seeing how I like Kaede as a character as well, it looks promising. I only gave you a seven in originality because, so far, it has been pretty much exactly like the Manga, with the exception of Kaede's influence. Still, keep this up please, for I too am a big fan of Negima, and any chance of reading more, be it the original work or fanwork of any decent quality, I take.
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