| "Coming out of the Closet" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sessh- twitch- kagome- twitch- `tba- just 4 added affect- here's rin! dont wrry. she has questions to answer but ill help u. Both- thanks ~Rin- sesshomaru sama.. where do babies come from? ~ tba- u guys are on ur own -runs far far away- ~ sessh- uh.......... ~kagome- deep deeep blush- ~ sessh- magic? ~rin- then where does the magic come from? ~ kagome- uh.. dreams? ~!rin- then where do the dreams come from? ~ both- look at eachother then rin- ill tell u when ur older. ~FIN~
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Title: woah! =D
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all 10s for you missy! not only was that extremely hot, it was beautifully written, detailed and played out. i haven't been to this site to read/write in a looong time. but it was nice to come back to something so brilliant! the ending was unexpected, lovely, and completely flawless. and this was a one shot! bravo lol.
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Reviewed By: Teenager from Mars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. You're very talented and have an exellent eye for detail!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 12:09 CST
Comment/Review:
haha, very cute ;)
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