| "Dragon Ball SS" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: ilex9
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 19:57 CST
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Took me the first few chapters to really get drawn in, but once I got through everything you have so far, I really enjoyed this. It felt a little bit scattered at first, but things started to gel towards the last few chapters, and I'm wondering what you're planning on doing with the rest if you're still updating. I like that you've found a way for some of the female characters to shine in their own right, and that something big is going on behind the scenes with the Kais.
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Reviewed By: killthwight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 13:34 CDT
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I really, really enjoyed reading this story! It made me giggle, gasp and sometimes laugh out loud, and it was a joy reading what you posted so far. Please post more chapters! This story is my new crack and I'd love to see it continued. ;)
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 21:55 CDT
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Wonder what the purple dragon wanted Gohan to see? Things seem to be hotting up, with the media on everyone's trail.
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 18:32 CDT
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Hope Gohan wil be alright, and what is in the place that Picollo and Dende can't get into up on the Lookout?
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 17:11 CDT
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The Kais seem to have an agenda regarding Saiyans. Just using Goku when they need him. Wonder if Paikon will get a chance to tell Goku what he heard, and what will Vegeta make of it as he's never trusted the Kais. Finding a way to bring King Vegeta, Bardock, and Raditz into the picture has really peeked my interest. This is shaping up to be a very good read.
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Title: to maney worrd it made me falll a spell try harder
Reviewed By: neorichard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
get boring in frist chapter i word quit this and start over rudo it mack shouter word it is plane not a good read because you have to many words
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Title: Greatly Enjoyable!
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this. I read the original story years ago, so I'm really loving this rewrite! Please continue to post more soon! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: rdk On: March 20, 2008 08:35 CDT
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I am enjoying the re-incarnation of this story. I like your take and the flow it very nice. This is such a fun read. "It was a tangle in my tapestry that resulted in your deaths," Endisty replied. "More like tampering from the gods," Endisty replied. Hehhehe. I can't tell you how much I love these two lines! This is a wonderful little way to get these guys back into the action. Well done.
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: The Daikon Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. It's well written without explaining more than it needs to so its easy to read and entertaining. I like stories like that. There were a few overlooked errors, but very little misspellings. Your work is like 'literary butter' my friend. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Zab Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing got a nine because there is always room for improvement. Originality/creativity got an eight because the Saiyans going into heat thing has been done a lot before, though you are going about it in a new and creative way. As I said in a review at a different site, you did a good job with this chapter. There is one thing that bothers me though. Bra's eyes water, but other than that, she has no real reaction to Vegeta's attack. The fact that she gets teary-eyed implies she didn't realize what Vegeta was actually doing, but she doesn't seem very upset about it, nor does she really seem particularly relieved to find out that her father didn't really mean her any harm. It can be inferred from her reactions that she was momentarily upset, then when Vegeta explained, she realized it was something he would do and just shrugged it off. It would have been nice to get some insight into her thought process about it though. At the same time, I do understand that a PoV bit from her wouldn't have really fit there. So, this isn't really a complaint or a criticism, but my thoughts on what would have been nice to see if it could have been made to fit well in the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: February 07, 2008 16:39 CST
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Interesting situations with hints of yaoi. I like it so far.
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