Title: Dang that was good! Reviewed By: snowdeep On: July 06, 2008 21:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Amon is still being mysterious. It's still cute to see Robin wearing her hair down because of what Amon said (So Kawaii!)And i must say that it was a very short chapter what for? oh is that really what the bartender's name is really...Master? I guess i have to watch the series again(Sigh). I hope you haven't given up on the case because it sounded interesting. You did add in more detail good for you :) well i still wondering what Amon is hiding and I'm determined to figure it out!(Determined look) so please update soon i'll keep an eye out.
Title: What? Hey! I Want to read more please Reviewed By: snowdeep On: July 03, 2008 20:59 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Hey i loved it! Ended too soon so that means you need to write more. I liked that you started at the very end of the series and went from there. You've nailed the characters very well that's good because i hate it when authors write a fanfic and don't get the characters right it burns me(drowning herself in a pool)Okay i'm fine nothing for you to worry about. That's really sweet that you put a Robin and Amon moment in the story i was really happy about that i hope you know. And you got them right too a case that was truly awesome. Your style is very great because you have lots of dialog i love description but hate too much of it. So if you want advice add a little more description but not too much. (Slaps herself) that's very rude of me. Maybe you don't want advice i just assumed that any author would like advice on their writing to better it but i don't know if you wanted it or not so (Bows)I'm very sorry. So I'm pretty new to the series but i did just buy it and have finished it and you happened to be the first Witch Hunter Robin I've read so congrats! (Flying confetti)Anyway you've left on some mystery and i really want to know who killed the drowning guy(don't know what else to call him) and I'm really curious about what Amon was reading that shocked him so much. So please continue writing I'll watch out for your story. Please continue.
