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| "For Our Children" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Tiffy On: January 17, 2009 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I'm beginning to realise that it is absolutely beyond pointlessness for you to even ask for reviews so we can tell you what we think. You seem too amazing for all of it. Lol, I think you should have an experience.. Take Parenthood... Trust me, you'll wait till you're forty before you want to be a mom. O_O Those babies were totally insane! But as usual, you did an amazing job getting into the previously-unseen inside of a character's head. And that's about all I have for comments here. I'm afraid I'm beginning to sound like a broken record. And possibly a bit like a stalker. xP
| Reviewed By: Kayland Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. You got into Esme's head really well dispite not being a mother so good job and i haven't seen a story like this on either mediaminer or fanfiction.net. Good job.
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