| "I Know My Duty" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: revlinda On: October 24, 2011 08:37 EDT
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I really love this story and am excited to follow it, but I have to admit I am getting confused by all the revisions. I'm never sure if I've read the revised version or not. |
Reviewed By: Candace On: November 19, 2010 09:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found your story on Twilighted, and then followed it over to Fanfiction.net..... I think this is a fantastic "What if?" story. I can not wait for the next part!!!! Sometimes I feal like slapping Edward upside the head... ; ) I'm hoping that you will be updating soon, as I'm looking forward to Edwards realization that Bella is still Bella, and more involvement from Carlisle... I was hoping that Bella and Carlisle were going to run into eachother when he visited... and how/if they're going to get out of Volterra! How you've written and are including Marcus is very interesting... is he going to help Edward see past his issues..? I'm also looking forward to how you write Bella's discovering she has a gift and what it is... as well as Edwards reaction to it... and Renata's involvement....lol... So much to write about, and you've been doing it soooo well! Have you read Ithaca is Gorges by giselle? It's a fantastic story as well... it's New Moon from Edwards POV.... Your story feels like the "What if?" to hers and S. Meyer's (you have been so true to S. Meyer's characters!). Anyway, I love I Know My Duty.... I'm hoping you will complete this story (I've been traumatized before...)... Happy writing! ~Candace |
Reviewed By: gwineveve On: November 24, 2009 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your plot so far, keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: evillaura On: March 29, 2009 21:20 EDT
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I'm glad you didn't go with the booze. I liked seeing how the scene might have been from Edward's POV.
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 00:47 EDT
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I had the pleasure of reading Meyer's incomplete Midnight Sun pdf (I'm guessing you've probably read it as well - it's hard to not snatch up everything available once you've gotten hooked on the universe...). I have to say that this feels and reads much like that: it's Edward and another dark moment of his life, just like Meyer might have written. I really look forward to reading more work like this. I loved your use of sensory details. (I don't like to -and so I haven't- read very many Twilight fics, so I don't have a lot to compare your work with in that manner.)
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