| "The Warmth of Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: King
Reviewed By: Cloudless Daysz On: May 25, 2009 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you so much for bringing this to fruition! i love the idea - very original, by the way - and you wrote it really well! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: fluffydemongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all I can say is that i love it and you made a very6 good story. the story is so original i've only read 1 story were sesshomaru shows up in the future and isn't like claming love for kagome and guess what thats your story anyways i want more storys from you!! hey tell me if you have anymore storys coming for now i am your fan!!! yeah for you!!!by the way i like kagomes almost suicide attempt it was great and suspensful (sorry my spelling sucks)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 06:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a rather nice story, well written. one thing though, it is difficult to read when there are no line breaks between paragraphs-- line breaks are a couple of blank lines before the next paragraph or speaker. keep in mind that mediaminer gremlins like to eat them too! ♣ i'll be looking forward to reading more. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kjpan On: May 13, 2009 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha! seshoumaru right
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