| "The Neighbor" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story was very cute and refreshingly funny, even though it made you feel quite sorry for Inuyasha and Kagome throughout (and especially at the end). I loved The Neighbor's antics, and the various responses throughout the course of the story. The ending was both cute and quite fitting - and also gives a sense of foreboding. Just when they thought they'd gotten rid of her for good... LOL!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2009 11:52 CST
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Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine... ROFLOL who would'a known? at least, they could look forward to her moving out of her parents house again sometime. --but if she's like that, what are her parents like? ♣ one would have thought that rap music would have gone out of style by now, then again i'm still watching guys walking around like they'd ridden a horse all day to keep their pants up-- sagging, it's not gone yet either. did you know that was a style that was started in prison, inmates were issued clothing that was usually too big? ♥
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2009 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, oh man... Well, at least it's truly only the mother's house, so with as often as she was at the apartment causing trouble, then maybe she won't be at the house too frequently. Still... LOL, poor Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this story alot cant wait to see what happens next. Update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inukag4ever18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 02:06 CST
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way to cute! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Loved the latest installment. Only one more to go, huh? Well...looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 22:31 CST
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i guess that would be the only attitude one could take in that situation-- relief that there won't be anymore furniture tie-ups, and that the guy won't be replacing her DDR game anytime soon. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 00:56 CDT
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good one!! at least she isn't listening to gangsta rap cranked up all the way with the heavy bass pounding 24-7. i have noticed there are fewer cars blasting that, i hope it's passing. then again guys are still 'sagging' their pants after ten years. ♣ i hope that happened to your 'real life' neighbor's television after playing DDR on your heads. ♠ how about the rhythmic headboard bounce off the wall, and the loud, equally rhythmic moans, grunts, and occasional shrill screams. *twitch* ♦ youtube.com/watch?v=EWVOgg6hoEQ ♥;
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, as always. I've never dabbled with the home version of Dance Dance Revolution myself, nor have I ever lived in an apartment complex, but it should be universal common knowledge that those two things should not be mixed together. Add demonic hearing into the mix, and well...I guess all I can say is "Poor Inuyasha", but then again, it was also his advanced hearing that let him in on the beautiful knowledge of her blunder right at the end there. I'm sure that made it worth it for our favorite hanyou. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa ho! Ha! Let that be a lesson out there to all you men who just do the occasional nod and "uh-huh" response, LOL. I am glad Kagome didn't get angry with Inuyasha, though even if she realized 'The Neighbor' was technically telling the truth, I'm sure his wide-eyed panicked expression was enough in and of itself for her to instantly figure out what had actually happened. Kagome knows damn well that Inuyasha would've torn into the girl long ago were it not for her insisting that he be nice to her. Still, with the level of audacity you've given 'The Neighbor', with this latest installment, I can't imagine what you plan on doing to round off the last few chapters. I am sincerely looking forward to where this goes from here.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 23:54 CDT
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oh no-- she didn't!! ♠ why am i assuming that the neighbor is rin? i just re-read the whole thing and it isn't her. just some random anon who is dumber than dirt, twitard, nuisance who happens to live upstairs... can't they still just give her to his brother? ♣ i don't have them like that anymore, but i do have the flasher perv across the street who masturbates in his window-- at least he's not after me, or my husband. ♦ -- and you had experienced all of that from one neighbor or was it a compilation? i could believe it was one but... *facepalm* ♥; youtube.com/watch?v=91p0NsjD24c
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 00:17 CDT
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*car
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 00:17 CDT
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had a friend who would do stuff to her cheating boyfriends, or if she was just mad at them. she's the person who taught me how to cut a brake line on a vehicle (she wouldn't do stuff like: youtube.com/watch?v=vSG4Cml7HXs ♦ that could be traced to her) ♣ glad inuyasha's care was safe and he even got something out of it! ♥
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the shit!
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Reviewed By: madmiko, why am I not signed in? On: August 16, 2009 23:53 CDT
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So the neighbor had a live-in boyfriend? Where was he when they were mopping up the flood? Lazy bum. And he left without taking any of his stuff she had thrown out the window? He left the comics? No way! LOL! Seems like their problems with her might be over--trashing two other tenants' cars would probably get her evicted. Now Inuyasha can go back and enjoy the "comfy" some more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...loving the latest chapter. At least it finally had nothing directly to do with them, aside from some disturbed sleep. That last line about Inuyasha managing to salvage some mint condition comics had me actually laughing out loud. I feel sorry for the other guys and their cars, but at least Inuyasha had planned ahead and had made sure his car was faaaarrrrr on the other side of the parking lot. I would've too after the 'glitter' episode. Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 18:02 CDT
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i'd lived in tenement apartments where one has to worry about poisoning oneself whilst poisoning the roaches, or the neighbors knifing one another outside my door and performing emergency first aid while the police and ambulance get there-- never been flooded though. ♦ yep, there are those who should never be allowed to spawn. ♥
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually saw the first Twilight movie, but don't really have any interest to see the others when they are released. I won't say it was bad, but it was definitely nothing worth getting obsessive compulsive over. *shrugs* I suppose the books are probably better, they usually are whenever a novel is translated into movie format. The way you depicted the "Twilight fan" was perfect, though. Who would care that she just inadvertently ruined his car? After all, being "like, one of the vampires" is faaaaaarrrrrr more important. If she's having a party later that night, I think Kagome and Inuyasha need to get a hotel room, LOL. Maybe he can introduce glitter-for-brains to the concept of what it means when an inu-hanyou's amber eyes turn red.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Our shared opinion of the Twilight series, and your accurate depiction of it's completely insane fans made my interest in the story go way up, and I was already plenty interested as it was. Great work!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 12:32 CDT
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Whew! For a minute there, I was afraid the neighbor was coming on to Inuyasha. Kagome would have had to smack a bitch. Yes, a bat youkai may be the solution--he can take her up a few hundred feet and drop her. This neighbor needs evicting.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 10:19 CDT
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i have a niece who is trying to get me to read that series-- she acts like the 'pusher' in those 'don't do drugs' films they made us watch in high school in the seventies, or in the movie 'reefer madness'. -is there something in that series that makes seemingly normal people obsessive fools? the comic writer/artist- head trip has a couple 'twilight' parodies on her DA account and she's received threats and hate mail... *shakes head* -and these people procreate. (i'm not saying anything to the cosplay- we used to dress up for 'rocky horror' in the seventies and still do, but we never inflicted ourselves on anyone who didn't want to be involved) ♦ one wonders what the party will be like-- noisy, rowdy- maybe he should park his car a few blocks away.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 23:34 CDT
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who would want to allow a mouse to run around their apartment- little mouse poop all over D= now i'm all grossed out! ♣ my cats would have had a little mousey meal if it would have gone over into my apartment. ♠ even if you aren't afraid of mice, when they run across your path suddenly or across your anatomy you can't help but screech. that made me laugh because i'd still scream bloody murder-- and jump onto something high and do the 'dance'-- stand on your tip toes and wave your hands in front of your face. ~ LOL ginny♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 21:53 CDT
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who in their right mind would try to pull boxes from the middle or bottom of a stack?! some people are intelligent but may lack common sense. *shakes head* ♣ see, if i were to unintentionally run over someone's stuff i would offer to replace it, or put it on my auto insurance or something-- "oh yeah, here's all the numbers and information, you can even get the expensive dishes to replace these, and send the receipt to the insurance company." ♦ sounds like the neighbor is as ditzy or more than kagome. i think you can have some real fun with this!! ♥
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsigned inI guess On: August 03, 2009 14:34 CDT
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Hmmm. Very interesting! I wonder what prompted this storyline? ^_^ Are you going to name this mysterious neighbor or may I continue to believe it is who I want it to be? I like the nice normalcy of Inuyasha and Kagome moving into their own place like any other young couple. Very enjoyable read!
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Title: So far so good...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like it's going to be a very interesting collection. I'm looking forward to the next eight installments.
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