| "One Half a Wing and a Prayer: Fly me to the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: avatoa
Reviewed By: avatoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 11:53 CST
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That pretty much covers what I was going to say about the matter. Thank you, Ranma.
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Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 23:25 CST
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There is no first chapter posted, nor has there been for quite some time. The original post was unformatted, when it was there, as well.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I did a oneshot where Ranma was the reincarnated mother AND father of the time guardian. So, if Ranma's Mommy, who got the instant Nanniichuan? Again. Love the story, even if its taken an omake-like turn. OBTW Genma deserves (an) Enema. ^☺^ ʇɐq ʎǝןıɯs ʎɯ ǝǝs
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Reviewed By: Anon5 On: February 07, 2010 13:51 CST
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---What the fuck?!? Please tell me that this is a case of two mommies (ie, Ranma being the father but staying female enough to equate being a father), because I still can't see this version of Ranma being intimate with a male. Happy writing, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Apropos On: January 18, 2010 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been looking forward to seing this start up again for a good long while. Glad to see it's still kicking, and still excellent. PS: Chapter 1 seems to have vanished into the ether. I hope you can get it back up soon.
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Reviewed By: Anon1 On: January 12, 2010 02:00 CST
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---Still waiting on the next update to this and your other current SM/R Story. Please continue soon!
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Title: And...
Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 00:03 CST
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Genma's a bastard? Check. Scouts except Setsuna are naive? Check. Ranma is a powerful, female sex-demon? Check. Bound lover girls? Check and double check. Okay, so the crossover begins. Okay, so let's see how things will play out with all our new mysteries and the sudden return of an old enemy. I hope you have as much fun writing this as we all have reading it. Also, where do I go to complain about the lack of formatting abilities for the reviews? It would be so much nicer if I could have line breaks or paragraphs, screw all this bold and font size crap. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: gsteemso [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2009 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most of chapter one is missing. Binary zero (NUL character) in the file, maybe? Anyway, love chapter two. "SHUT UP KUNO!" Awesome. I also noticed you have a lot of mis-words in this chapter (typos that look OK to a spellmangler but should have been caught by a decent copyeditor); that's why I only gave you 8 out of 10 for spelling. Looking forward to Three!
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Reviewed By: wolf40k [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 17:34 CST
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KILL THE EMO, LONG LIVE METAL!!! BEST. LINE. EVER. I'm getting it tattooed. But seriously Great chapter, hopefully the next one comes sooner than this one.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 10:59 CST
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Also, the initial section for chapter 1 is now gone. What's up with that?
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 10:58 CST
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Neh, fuck the metal, WIELD THE POWER OF ROCK! Still, does the eye glow thing mean Setsuna is a succubus too? An interesting twist, to say the least. In any case, awesome update, after all this time, now if only your other story can be updated too. And it's at such a good point, with the lady and the tiger about to go to the brawl, lmao. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Lictre On: December 04, 2009 21:16 CST
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Unfortunately, I have to give this a poor review, since it appears that no formatting made it into the page, as it comes across as a block of text with no paragraphs or other distinguishing controls. Block of text fics border on the entirely unreadable. Please re-examine your formatting and correct things.
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Title: Excellent start, except for formatting
Reviewed By: Narsil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start to a much-anticipated sequel. I gave a slightly low Originality rating because it's a foundation chapter, just beginning to lay out where things are going, but I don't expect the rating to stay that low, not after the first story (one of the best fanfics I've read, period). For the block-of-text problem, where the line breaks are supposed to be is obvious so I simply copy-and-pasted to Word and used search and replace - made it perfectly readable, no problem at all.
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Title: Formatting plroblem...
Reviewed By: McHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start, but would be better if it was correct formatted and not one whole block of text... So please fix it.
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Reviewed By: PhiloWorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 16:31 CDT
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I secon... no, make that tenth that motion... there must be a way to neaten this up.
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