| "Chained World: The Fall of the House of Kuno" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Neihaera On: January 15, 2012 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've found this to be an extremely engrossing exploration of a very disturbing topic - slavery in the modern world. The body count, frankly, is a bit high for my own preference, but at least you haven't committed the far more common sin of soft-pedaling the whole issue. |
Reviewed By: terri v On: December 06, 2011 06:32 EST
Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed your tale so far and can't wait to see what happens to everyone in the aftermath of the attack. What I'm most looking forward to is what Ranma does to Kuno and his retainers. |
Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: May 29, 2010 02:28 EDT
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Hmmm, an interesting read so far. Dunno if I like the concept (kinda crass really) but well written if nothing else, and definitely worth reading more of. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Anon1 On: February 08, 2010 19:02 EST
Comment/Review:
---So Kodachi is semi-sane? Who knew . . . I doubt Kodachi has much love for her brother, so despite the blood, I wouldn't be surprised to find her quite willing to aid in any murder plans when the time comes to kill Kuno. Happy writing, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: ANON1 On: January 16, 2010 00:52 EST
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---Damn . . . could you maybe consider writing a spinoff where Setsuna wins? I was actually looking forward to see what she had in store for Ranko . . . Or maybe you could have her by Ranko after the Kunos are killed off? That would be a happier ending for everyone. Happy writing, and update soon!
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