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"Embers of the Heart:" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2017 17:31 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure if I was going to like this or not at first. I was not sure about Seiji calling Shin weak and sending him away for that length of time without seeing him.....seems uncharacteristic. I think I would like to see more from shins point of view. And why did the warlords keep him so long? This is just my insatiable need for more of the story. I still feel my insides twist up in anxiety when I read your stories as they are brilliantly written and image provoking. I had a feeling Naaza was dead... He deserved it for hurting Shin. At least that is how I interpreted it. And Seiji never answered Shins question at the end. Overall, I can't wait to read more of your stories. You do an awesome job. I hope you are still interested in this series because you are very talented.


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